Reviews for Number Our Days |
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VryUnique chapter 26 . 11/22/2023 I'm going to guess that Bella was now in the same place as Edward so she had to catch up, cue the fast forward. I thought she was going to get Charlie at the hospital, the suspense is killing me. So, is Bella going to meet up with the Cullens in school or is Alice going to see a black spot that makes them go out searching for her? |
VryUnique chapter 25 . 11/22/2023 Damn! I wonder if they were told about Edward's human time traveling wife before Bella had shown up. I thought she was in Washington and the shapeshifters were going to find her. To know she was in Alaska and real wolves were out there is scary as hell. |
VryUnique chapter 24 . 11/22/2023 That's sad. I would still think they could control it if they knew how to or tried. Either way the Ward family were very negligent to their future generations, they left them clueless. If the family travelers were healthy at one time than there has to be a way for them to be healthy again, even if they have to move back to Ireland. I am kind of hoping that Bella finds him in the next 4 years and helps him. |
VryUnique chapter 23 . 11/22/2023 Nice. So sweet. |
VryUnique chapter 22 . 11/22/2023 Awwww. Poor Edward. Bella needs to ask her mother to send her family pictures so she can show Elliott a timeline. I'm hoping Bella runs into Edward at school. I wonder how long she has been gone and if she is going to show up in the same alley with Charlie waiting for her. I wonder if he will see the ring. |
VryUnique chapter 21 . 11/22/2023 Was Alice hinting at a decision being made of Bella changing? Was it Edward who slammed out the front door? Bella could die at anytime. What happens to her is dangerous, it's not like she appears in Edward's house when she pops in to his time. |
VryUnique chapter 20 . 11/22/2023 Yah! The whole family is together. I wonder if Jasper and Alice have been told all about Bella. |
VryUnique chapter 19 . 11/22/2023 Where is Bella suppose to come back to? She might end up back in Phoenix. Her entrances and exits don't seem to even coincide all the time. There doesn't seem to be any rules. I forgot to mention last chapter that Bella shouldn't have ran. She could have let Victoria catch her and do the same thing to her. James wasn't even able to grab on to her without scorching himself. She is quite gifted and now she has to learn to control it. From what we have heard she might even be able to control the time travel, it seems linked to her emotions. |
VryUnique chapter 18 . 11/22/2023 Wow! Exciting! I can see why Edward didn't want to tell her about what happened, she might have not been able to duplicate what she had done if she was aware of her gift. The way everything went down seemed strange since Edward could read minds. He just allowed Bella to walk into the lions den. Then, Victoria was able to subdue him, which was disappointing. More because of his gift and less because she was probably smaller than him. James said he was working for Aro but he obviously had his own agenda. What that agenda was wasn't clear beyond him wanting Bella's blood and she had gotten away. If he was working for the Volturi then they would probably want him to bring Bella to them if she had a gift. I can't wait to see what happens. |
VryUnique chapter 17 . 11/22/2023 If I was Bella I would never relax in a tub or sleep naked and dress as quickly as possible. I would be scared of time traveling in the nude. I don't know why Bella latched on her Uncle being dead and didn't even entertain the idea that he disappeared. Especially since Renee didn't seem too sure of what happened to him. She agin thought of being followed when she was in the tub and still didn't mention it to Edward. So many stories with Edward saying he would kill himself and I have not read one that has him saying he will build a bonfire and walk into it. |
VryUnique chapter 16 . 11/22/2023 Awesome! Love this story! Bella needs to tell Edward about being followed and ordered a drink. It seems silly that she hasn't mentioned it. Is it one of the wolves? If it was he should have approached her, I can't see the harm in that. |
VryUnique chapter 15 . 11/22/2023 So the gene comes from the Ward side of the family. That excludes Renee's father who left when she was 10. |
VryUnique chapter 14 . 11/22/2023 Hmmmm... I need details. There must be some things that Bella can know. Did the wolves see her disappear? |
VryUnique chapter 13 . 11/22/2023 Wow, Bella was there for 3 months that time. What was in the woods? Werewolf? Shapeshifter? Another vampire? Was it the guy who gave her the creeps before they moved? I couldn't understand him being mentioned if he wasn't going to play at least a small part in the story. They shouldn't have gone to school as a couple if it was going to cause such an uproar because of the times. |
VryUnique chapter 12 . 11/22/2023 Who was the guy that made Bella uncomfortable? He wasn't cold, was he a vampire? |