OMG! I can't believe she landed back in the closet. Last time she ended up in her bed
even though she left from the bathroom at the party.
I'm going to guess that the Cullens are in Forks. If that is the case than how does the
time traveling fit in? Will Edward have memories that Bella won't? I can't see Bella just
stop time traveling to them because she is near them in her real life. So, will they have
all these memories of Bella from the past. I can't see them having transplanted memories
every time she comes back from seeing them. If that's the case than things can always
be different every time she returns, like the butterfly effect.

I thought Edward was mad for her snooping, which he would have had a right to be.
I would have been one thing if she was just standing in his room but she was rifling
through his drawers. Who does that?
Edward going to look pretty funny walking back into the house holding Bella's dress.
That should be hilarious!

I can't believe she opened his drawers, rude. They need to tell her about
their super hearing.

I like a nice Rosalie, all though I think there should have been some interaction
or lead up to their closeness. A "we feel responsible for you" didn't really feel
like a good enough reason.

She was cold all the way through, was she outside? Where did they find her?
I felt bad for Rosalie which is a rare occurrence.

Maybe Bella will be on her way to Forks, where the Cullens are living.

Fascinating story!
She should have told them that her visits to them are the only ones out
of her timeline. Why was Rosalie welcoming? Was it because she doesn't
think Bella is a threat? Because she will just disappear again?

If I was Bella I would be bringing a long coat with me wherever I went and being
careful of what I sleep in. I would be tempted to sleep with my backpack. She had
5 dollars in 1934 which would be more than a hundred dollars than so I would have
smaller cash with as early dates I could get.

1925? So Edward has been a vampire for 7 years and he didn't leave on his
rebellious stage until 1927 so he should have been living with Carlisle and Esme.
I wonder if Edward remembers Bella from when he was a child. He might even
have seen her in Carlisle's head.
Bella said an easier commute to Charlie in California at the beginning of the
chapter and than she said he lived in Forks at the end.
Mexico? I hope she doesn't go to the vampire wars while she is there.

Maybe Bella will be following her soulmate around.

Sounds interesting, I don't think I ever read this story before.
Bella should be home schooled. Her mother is a teacher so she
probably has the credentials to qualify, than Bella can study at her
own pace.

Love this story! It’s impressive how you wove the multiple timelines together. I’m sure that took some planning. I’ve always had questions about two plot points, though. First, how did the Cullens know to search for Bella in the Alaskan wilderness? Did they spend every day, all day searching for her during the years since she left? If they assumed her time traveling would automatically take her to where they were, why would they expect she’d be lost and need to found this particular time?

I also wonder why Bella couldn’t have clued her parents in just a little about her plan to become immortal? She wouldn’t have to give them any sort of details, just let them know she’d found happiness in another timeline (Renee already knew she liked a boy in a different time), and if/when she didn’t return one day, it was because she’d found a way to stay in her happy timeline. Or some other story she concocted that would give them a little peace.

But those two things aside, I really do love rereading this fic. Very clever!

Brilliant take on tne Cullen story!
R

What a great story. Just found this and chewed through it in two days. I think this will definitely be a reread. Thanks for sharing and looking forward to seeing if you have more stories.

One of the best, most well-written stories I’ve read. Thank you!