Reviews for Punishment or a Gift
Nattish chapter 2 . 12/29/2002
You've a good idea I think. I'm always a fan of mpreg for some reason. Draco is being horrible acting as if Harry has no part in this. Unless he does not know he is pregnant yet (which might be strange for 3 months. Then again, I don't know anything about wizards having babies Continue please. Does anyone besides Draco know?
asaroth69 chapter 2 . 12/29/2002
argh! Harry is being such a prick! he left that poor draco on the very first night and then feels shameful? even dirty? he hasn't got the guts to speek to him, c'mon draco do something!

I hope harry will quit that niny state and make up with draco.

please update soon!-
the gaffa chapter 2 . 12/28/2002
I like the story... but could you fix the paragraphs ITS REALLY HARD TO READ

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DR asia chapter 2 . 12/28/2002
Go you! This is great! I like this. A lot. Just a suggestion... can you separate the story into more paragrahps? It's getting kinda hard to read when there's a huge lump of words together...
Crysta-Astra chapter 1 . 12/28/2002
ver interesting story, although it should have been draco to wake up first, and leave beacsue its the gryffindor house not slytherin, but whatever, it dont matter that much do a few more chapters.
Phoenix353 chapter 1 . 12/28/2002
I think I know what happened...

The potion that Draco drank made him able to get pregnant, huh?

I'm not that big of a mpreg fan, if at all... But well... Continue on for those that do!
Chrysanthemum Moon chapter 1 . 12/28/2002
Ayame: ok I like this story...


Ayame: *baring fangs* Draco calm down now or I'll make you.

Draco: *gulps* you wouldn't, would you...

Ayame: *smirking* we know perfectly well what I'm capable of, so you want to try me.

Draco: *backs away* no, uhm...I'll be leaving now...Bye *turns and runs from the room*

Ayame: *shakes head* well that should get him out of your hair. Ok now I like this story and I can't wait to read more...Ja Ne *turns and goes the Direction Draco went*
Andia chapter 1 . 12/28/2002
Okay, I like the idea, and you wrote it out really well (not a good way to start a me, I did like it!)...a few things though *wince, I hate doing this* First thing, the stereo wouldn't have worked at Hogwarts because anything running on muggle electricty would have gone crazy- so put in something about it being bewitched. Secondly, how in the world did Draco get the password to the Gryffindor common room? Just a thought...beside that, I like!
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