|Reviews for Drifter|
| TheGiantRock chapter 1 . 9/5/2015
Hohoho, veeeeeeeeery interesting opening! I assume that since Lucina recognizes a connection between Robin and Grima, this is post-game. Perhaps Robin woke up after defeating Grima, but without the standard epilogue scene of Chrom being there?
I actually can't tell if this is designed to be a one-shot or continued, because it feels like it could work either way. Although, since the title is "Drifter" and that applies to Lucina, I guess if you continued it'd be about Lucina's travels and Chrom/Robin trying to play catch-up?
Bah. What I'm trying to say is that I don't know exactly what's happening and what to expect, so good work on that. Also, good writing. I'm super tired right now and I started off completely skimming the story, but as I noticed the quality of the writing I actually stopped and went back to read properly from the beginning.
Your absolute best line in this story is, by far:
"You killed my younger brother," one of them said.
"If you're feeling bitter about it, then I'm right here," Lucina stated.
Totally badass. I commend you for this line alone.
| Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 8/31/2015
Really, really cool! :D