This story made me smile. And Haldir isn't dead, which makes me smile more. :)

LOL! Very good, Jay! My imagination has always done it that way as well - having Legolas's count much higher, but having him let Gimli win the game. (Which would be why I found the count in the TTEE irksome, but oh well, it was worth the extra Orli scene.) Great job!

Good. Haldir shouldn't have beem there in the first place, and you messed up the best line in the movie. You know what I mean. Tis good.

Glad someone has the guts to let Haldir live (though at least PJ didn't kill him with a hyen... ah, I mean, warg).

YAY! ! ! He lives! Hehehe, yes if PJ can take that liberty then there's no reason why you can't. Astonishing story. I love it. Please continue soon. _~

I like it. Too bad PJ didn't think of that. It would have looked good in the film.

Oh yeah! You go! Although I absolutely loved T, I was also horrified that PJ killed Haldir! *sob* That was simply, UNACCEPTABLE! So nice to see a fic that took care of the little "boo boo"! ;) Great job.

You can't end it there.

pLEAsE U HAVE TO CARRY ON soon

this story is so good.

please don't let that be the last chapter

Aye! I hated when Haldir died! That was the worst part of the movie. Nearly had me crying!

*~* Dy *~*

A very exciting and well-written story - and thanks for making Haldir, whom PJ slew for no obvious reason, live again! ;-)

Wow, that's how it should have been! Thanks for making it work, even movie-verse!

Hi,

I'm afraid I am one of those bastards that read and read and never write a story - maybe in the future I'll have some time (and COURAGE) to venture into fanfic myself.

Now to your 'Leaves In The Forest'.

This is wonderful. I love in-character and in-canon (either books or movie) stories that are well written - and your story has it all. It is a delight to read, especially with such accurate orthography it is very soothing to the eye ;o) [I found, however a (typing?) mistake here: "Aragorn reached for the scabbard to sheath Andúril" - I believe it should read 'sheathe'. This is, however, the ONLY thing I've stumbled over so I thought I mention it in an aside.]

I will now go on to chapter three, and I'm sure I'll love this one, too.

Please keep up writing!

Cheers,

an admirer from Germany

yay! I like your version better! write more!

hehehe :)

YAY! HE'S ALIVE!

YOU ROCK!

omg! lol im so happy you keep Haldir alive!

I want a tee now that says in big bold letters on the front "HALDIR LIVES" lmao!

Pllllease write more (unless you hadnt planned on writing more) its very good!

-Insane Muse