Reviews for Stolen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I hope you find the inspiration to finish this because it is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Groan - Kilia and Filia are the movieverse teenage twits ... |
![]() ![]() namely a bear? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor injured Fili and worried Kili. I do wonder when Dis will come back into the story or how you will tie both parts together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter seemed rushed. When you change scenes put ### or some other indicator. Waiting to see what happens with Fili now injured. |
![]() ![]() hhhmmm me thanks that the dwarrows forging, would be easy for one of them to put (discreatly placed runes) the location of their wearabouts engraved in the metal, say a sword? |
![]() ![]() Poor Dís! :( I love all the details you put into this chapter! You've really thought out this story well! :) And I totally understand the struggle with writing and school... *sigh* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good to see what it is Dis has been dealing with. Can't wait to see more of the brothers. |
![]() ![]() POOR LITTLE FRERIN! *sobbing* I love him... And that last part is just... AHHHHHH! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would've liked to see more outside Thorin's nightmares. Otherwise, nicely done. |
![]() ![]() I love this story. But the CLIFFIE! |
![]() ![]() I'm glad you persevered and wrote this chapter, because I loved it. Poor boys... And Thorin. They're going to have a hard time without Dís... :( And know I'm DYING to know what will happen next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story! It is well written and off to a great start! I look forward to see how the story will unfold. Thanks for writing :) |
![]() ![]() I think this is a wonderful, amazing idea, and I can't wait to read more! I love it already! Why aren't there a gazillion reviews?! :) |