Reviews for Maelstrom |
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Jose19 chapter 4 . 7/27 Amazo in reality when it evolves hecomes too powerful for Naruto to handle. |
Jose19 chapter 3 . 7/26 Naruto will have a hard awakening most heroes don’t get paid for their services. |
Hitsugana chapter 23 . 6/30 It's a shame this story didn't continue. Overall I really liked it. I found Naruto's background very interesting and it makes me wish it was a story on its own. Him not having Kurama was a good move. It makes his skill set and abilities much more diverse. There were only a few critiques I had. For one, I felt that Naruto's personality was a bit dry, however we did see character growth which was good but I felt it could be expounded upon more. He is portrayed as being very clinical and somewhat cold and it would've been a bit more interesting to see his ideology clash with the justice league which surprisingly didnt happen. Overall he seemed emotionally inert. Also, there were some arcs that had there ending skipped, which is perfectly fine considering they are a forgone conclusion, but them playing out would've added more credence to the emotional aftermath of the missions. These are just my nitpicks, nothing too major. Thank you for writing. |
akirathewolflord chapter 23 . 5/1 Pity this was abandoned, despite the improper sentence structure (using s instead of ed in sentences as an example), the drama was rather well written |
deathmach chapter 23 . 4/24 Please continue this |
Ninetails12forever chapter 23 . 1/25 Just finished your story. Really liked it hope you continue even if it is a long shot. |
bibink729 chapter 23 . 11/28/2023 nnnn |
demigoddemeanor chapter 23 . 10/28/2023 to bad it will enver be updated again |
m chapter 23 . 9/19/2023 Love This Fic! |
ghost boy 952 chapter 1 . 4/13/2023 really like this story. hope you come back to it soon |
theronjohn325 chapter 23 . 3/8/2023 It would be nice if you could come back to this. This is a fantastic story, the pacing is good, the character interactions are great. Yeah, I definitely want to see how this ends. Update soon. |
Jaydog123 chapter 1 . 1/7/2023 Hope you update this one day! |
tylerbraden13 chapter 23 . 1/6/2023 I really hope you come back to this it was good. Hope you're doing well and enjoying the new year |
killernooch chapter 1 . 12/19/2022 wish this story would have continued |