Beautiful. This chapter made me cry. This story made me cry. It rings true and clear, and you should be very proud of yourself for writing such a masterful piece of pure life.
Brava. I will certainly keep a lookout for Part 2.
Na vedui!

This chapter is priceless!
Priceless, I tell you!

I was doubling over in laughter ('',)

I love princess Irulan personality, particulary the: "Eat this you worm" I'm rolling on the floor.

"The breaker of hearts and oaths" I love that exchange with Galadhriel. Thank you for hitting her with some truth.
Maybe I don't fully get Irulan, but I'm not to thrilled with her right now. Even though she is trying to save M.E., I can't help but feel she is a , selfish, brat. I don't like what she has become.

LOOOVE IT! PLANNING TO READ THE SEQUEL RIGHT NOW!

This chapter truly makes it hard to grasp the fact that English is not your first language. Your words are absolutely beautiful and flow like any professional author's would :)

I love your quotes at the end, especially this one. :)

So many confessions and emotions in this chapter :)

And so they kiss again... But oh my, I don't know if I'll see Legolas the same now. He seems like such a broken man... Broken by love nonetheless.

I hope it doesn't come to her falling... That'll definitely be a sad moment.

What would you say Irulan looks like? Is there a person you imagine her looking most like cause I'm getting curious? :)

Did she finally lose control?

So sad, but nice to see a protective Legolas. Even though I was just as frustrated as Irulan was concerning her protectiveness :)

So many emotions. You're right, it wouldn't have been as nice if it was split in two

I would've let haldir braid my hair too. ;). I don't blame her at all.