|Reviews for The Sixth Hokages Rival|
| T.C chapter 11 . 10/20/2018
OH MY GOSH! This masterpiece needs to be updated pronto! I seriously was so overwhelmed with joy over this! Please finish it!
| TheAcidBunny chapter 11 . 7/29/2018
OMGGGGG! You just had to end it there!? No updates in forever?! This was so fuckin cute and I absolutely love how you've captured Kakashi's and Obito's feeling towards each other. I will bookmark this and hope that you eventually decide to continue this.
| KingKagura chapter 11 . 7/1/2017
OMG so good! But that damn Raikage! Right when they were about to be happy! Please update soon
| yfcychvjhvrydtrdyviubirxwardcv chapter 11 . 3/26/2017
Looking forward to more!
| Nozaki Akira chapter 11 . 1/15/2017
Wow, an awesome story! I'm late reading this, damn, haha.
Too bad in last chapter Kakashi didn't f*ck Obito, but ah... Kakashi, I know you didn't want to f*ck Obito when he's drunk and not in the conscious state, you're a kind husband(?) ((lol))
And this chapter... oh, don't go, Obito, not after you getting closer to Kakashi and have sweet moment with him. :(( Anyway good work. XD Keep writing!
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/27/2016
I am in love with your story!
I hope Obito will be okay! Especially now that he and Kakashi are so close!
Great writing, thank you!
| Buffabuff72 chapter 1 . 9/19/2016
Nice. Thanks for the update.
| Huhudqkhwiuru2k chapter 11 . 9/10/2016
I'm really excited to see what will happen next! :D Good job on this chapter :)
| Kris Senju chapter 11 . 9/9/2016
ah fuck this going to be bad.
| JaiMesRaisons chapter 11 . 9/8/2016
damnit Obito why do you act so compulsively, you're going to make things even worst! great story, can't wait to see next chapter :D
| sanghyuk chapter 11 . 9/8/2016
It was all perfectly fine last chapter, blowjob and eveything and now the problems :(
What will Kakashi do? I dont to them to part ways again, poor Obito... I mean, he was wrong and was the bad guy but Kakashi can bring out the best of him!
Thanks for this update, as always, keep on with the hard work :D
| ritag1998 chapter 11 . 9/8/2016
NO you can't take obito away from kakashi, great chapter by the way, looking foward to your next chapters, keep up the good work! ;-)
| EverythNoth chapter 1 . 8/26/2016
I've been following this story for a while now but was always a bit too shy to write a review but then I thought, why not let's just go for it! I think I came across this when you were writing chapter 4 maybe and I have to say this is my favourite story on ff.n so far. The way you characterize adult Obito is just spot on , so many people struggle to capture him well they either make him too nice or too mean and angsty and you have the right balance between a bit angsty and a bit tsunderey but still true to the original Obito in Naruto.
When I first began reading this, I thought it was a cute fanfiction about friendship and growth and it soon turned into Kakashi x Obito needless to say you build up to it very well (I was surprised when it was made official but only because I like to pretend that maybe Obito would be straight and would never fall for "Bakakashi" of all people just to fuel my inner fan girl) but the way you write it makes it so realistic and fits well with the characters. Obito fell for Rin because she was one of the only ones who supported him and was there for him and similarly, in your story Kakashi is the only one who really supported and was there for and cared for Obito , kind of filling the role that Rin once had and honestly only Kakashi could really fill the role because he's the only character who knows and understands Obito's pain.
Honestly you just, the way you write is very easy to follow and as someone who gets bored easily and runs away when she sees walls of text I could follow your story and wanted to keep reading! Please, I hope you continue this fanfiction and I hope you continue to write other stories and hopefully this doesn't sound stalkerish but by chance I came across one of your reddit posts about your writing improving and when I clicked the link low and behold, it's my favourite ff.n story LOL Just though it was a cool coincidence and that I'd share :)
| bartlettpear chapter 10 . 8/17/2016
I am grinning so hard lol I am super happy for these two, I just hope Obito will not freak out once he's sober. Thank you for the update :-D
| bartlettpear chapter 9 . 8/17/2016
Teuchi is awesome. I knew that Neji died but I wasn't aware Obito had been the one to kill him, wow. Kakashi writing that note and having Obito read it when he is not there feels like such a youthful and sweet gesture.