Reviews for Observations of a Wannabe Kunoichi
Ariadne Venegas chapter 36 . 8/24/2024
Here you make a great mistake! The rasengan is a legacy! Is for Naruto only and he could think to whom he gave it. Kakashi knows it because he was Minato star student, and Jiraiya his mentor… one of them could teach it to his son in his stead if he died. You can’t be given it up as a party gift.

The rasengan uses a lot of Chakra that Sakura doesn’t have! So she can’t learn it!

It was fun so far but you made a too big mistake. It was bad enough that she was watching the exams with the Kage and Orochimaru in disguise because that would never had passed, but ok. But this?!
Ariadne Venegas chapter 18 . 8/16/2024
It is not unrealistic, but you gave a lot of Naruto stuff to Sakura, I don’t think that is fair. Also Kakashi had being teaching Naruto taijutsu? Because in canon he never did, and apparently here he only has time for Sakura and Sasuke. Because you know Clones? He could give one to everyone and teach them something.
Ariadne Venegas chapter 3 . 8/16/2024
It is supposed to be like 5 or 6 for normal accelerated schooling with little ninja history I suppose and then Ninja academy proper. Because all them knew write, read and complex mathematics, and science. Naruto I think never learn to read and write properly until Jiraiya took him with him, for the way he looked the things that were written like he couldn’t read them or understand it and he didn’t have sight problems that were addressed at all in the series.
Ariadne Venegas chapter 2 . 8/16/2024
As in canon people wanted him to die, not as their hands , but by hunger or an enemy they were totally stupid and forgot that the Kiuby could escape, even some Ninja like the teacher Mizuki. They thought they were killing the Kiub, killing Naruto.
Vishw chapter 12 . 8/9/2024
I'm done. Not much different than other 'Sakura-centric' stories where Sakura basically steals most of Naruto's shining moments and Naruto becomes the useless, annoying side character...
madal434 chapter 43 . 3/6/2024
Very much enjoyed this work. I would greatly enjoy a sequel, if you decide to do so.
acetwolf94 chapter 43 . 4/1/2023
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
Guest chapter 28 . 8/19/2022
“Quixotic” is also the word Dogbert uses to cheat in scrabble.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/17/2022
I always think it’s funny in Wave Country arcs that Gato is literally just “cat” in Spanish.
Alice Scarlett Knabel chapter 43 . 7/31/2022
socks you don't want to make a sequel this was very well written
Alice Scarlett Knabel chapter 23 . 7/31/2022
wow you mean Sasuke isn't just the embodiment of angst amazing
Alice Scarlett Knabel chapter 2 . 7/30/2022
love it right of the bat
WalkersCrown chapter 36 . 6/26/2022
I was somewhat enjoying this until you Pervy Sage just gave a away the Rasengan to two people who have nothing to do with Minato's legacy. Somethings are sacred man. Even Naruto only taught it one person who then taught his(narutoson.
WalkersCrown chapter 31 . 6/26/2022
You made the byakugan look like absolute trash here.. and I hated neji in the chunin exams as much as the next man but him being beating by anyone but Hinata or Naruto feels anticlimactic. It's like if she avenged the Uchiha clan by killing it itachi for Sasuke.
generalwd40 chapter 15 . 3/24/2022
Yes naruto is not the most intelligent, but continue reading before judgement, he will time. He is 1213 years old at the chunin exam, so ?
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