Chapter 6 review

How could he possibly carry $14,000 worth of books out of the store by himself? Probably should drop the zero from that 1380 galleons lol.

You’d find it hard to stick a six inch blade into a 4.5 inch frame haha.

I'm done. horrid story. took a look at other chapter's as a skim and it doesn't get any better.

Meh, the first chapter is as bland as 98% of every other wbwl story out there.

The second chapter's first bit is also horribly done, it felt like it was all just filler and lame excuse. For instance child neglect is done purposely in this situation as the chapter just doesn't bother explaining how parents who are supposedly loving forget a child after 5 years. And a 5 year old who is supposedly forgotten about can read before that and read sophisticated books that most college aged kids have problems pronouncing. Seriously put some effort into it.

He got a quarter million phones for six dollars apiece and he is complaining that it is a little expensive? Original Motorola razr backstock phones from the early 2000’s are sold for between 80 and 100 today in 2024. He is nearly getting them for free and may actually be getting them for free if that qoute includes shipping.

He got a quarter million phones for six dollars apiece and he is complaining that it is a little expensive?

this story is FIRE lol i love OP evil harry

great story. i enjoyed your use of the 2 story verses. thanks

He bought $13,800 worth of books! Pickup truck? Bag of holding? He plans to read 24.7 ?Yeah, the girl was weird asking if he wanted to books in a bookstore...but Harry was weirder.

My mother had twins. One died only a few hours after birth. Mom NEVER forgot the twin she lost. I find the idea of forgotten and abandoned Harry absolutely preposterous. Still. looks like the beginning of a good story. Thanks

I'm enjoying your tale a lot. BTW, you might have meant "awfully" rather than "offly".

this fic became a joke soon as Harry met Daphne

This chapter just proves that the boy-who-lived bullshit should not have been allowed. And focusing on just one son only and not treating both sons as equals. And forgetting the fact you are dealing with twins. That is why I would make it clear to the wizards and witches of The United Kingdom of Great Britain that they cannot be trusted to Govern and Police themselves. As and the fact that I would have given them a warning years before especially Albus. And the worshiping humans is wrong immoral and illegal. Those forms are heroes, celebrities, and so much more. And sadly it is even an issue with non-magicals. They have forgotten and in many cases ignored the laws and commandments given to us on the matter.

And sadly too many authors write this crap but don't think about the consequences. And most are younger than me with a few that are of my generation and age who have also forgotten. But yet many who are of my age and generation have not heck have even seen those who are older than me and are of my parents generation who have written on site. And making changes to canon to point out problems they see in Canon to Correct them. In hope of getting threw to the younger generations.

wow this universe's Thanos is as pathetic as Voldemort for having a feud with a 6-year-old.

Wow, what a fucking garbage bullshit ending, I want several hours of my god dam life back I wasted on this fucking trash of a story.