Reviews for Blood Stained
Guest chapter 30 . 7/15/2021
two fucking chapters ago this fanfic was perfect. Now, we have a spineless harry that allowed everyone including shield walk all over him like a weakling. bravo author, never have seen anybody who managed to ruin his fan fiction this thoroughly this quickly. but then again, wouldn't surprise me if you were one of those people demanding that women be elevated higher then man because they are 'Mindless raping beasts'
Guest chapter 29 . 7/15/2021
I am disgusted. until this chapter the fanfic was perfect, but then you not only made harry a weak ass dude that has no spine left and had him accept shields offer, something against his very principles and the memory of nick. This decision was stupid and ruined the entire fanfic
Rune Tobor chapter 46 . 7/14/2021
Astaroth

Between the Avengers, Harry, Dr. Strange and S.H.I.E.L.D. I think he can be beaten.
Add in Sammy and an adult Rose if the demon waits a bit.
Bye bye demon trash!
Rune Tobor chapter 42 . 7/14/2021
Wow!

Just remembered that in chapter 37 you explained why James and Lily forgot about Harry.

Plot hole paved over, thanks.
Rune Tobor chapter 41 . 7/14/2021
If Thanos is so overwhelmingly powerful, why does he need an army?

Ego?

I don't like how no evil ever seems to permanenly die in the comics.
That Jean Grey has died and been brought back so many times is just as foolish.
Rune Tobor chapter 36 . 7/14/2021
Sex scenes are very easy to write ... BADLY!

Hugs, kisses, and hints like above are the way to go.

Then the reader can imagine the rest.
Rune Tobor chapter 33 . 7/14/2021
In the fic M-Day by mjimeyg Loki gets Judged.

In chapter 22 of the fic Loki is caught by Death and senteced to live life again, as a girl!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2021
Wonderful work
A believable cast of characters acting in Character.

Thanks
Rune Tobor chapter 32 . 7/14/2021
Harry in Star Wars is fun, I will look after I finish this one.
Rune Tobor chapter 31 . 7/14/2021
Long ago, there was a Batman movie, might have had Val Kilmer in it.
A paperback was also sold. In the book you got to know what the characters thought.
The movie only showed what they did. The extra depth made the book better.
Funny thing was the book was made after the movie.
Usually its the reverse...
Rune Tobor chapter 30 . 7/14/2021
Either your spellchecker is old or you use speech to text.

In the first chapter you have quiz where you meant crib.
In this chapters authors note at the end you have right where you meant write.

Does not really bother me, unlike others I am smart enuf to figure out what you meant.
What would bother me is an incomplete fic but this is done.

Thanks for writing.
Rune Tobor chapter 28 . 7/14/2021
Here is an Idea.
Reverse the animagus magic and have an animal take human shape.

It would allow Harry/girlHedwig and Harry/girlFawkes or Harry/girldragon...

I have not seen Harry/girlGoblin either.
Rune Tobor chapter 27 . 7/14/2021
The is gold!
No diamond!
Not quite a valuable as antimatter...

Dumbledore trapped and manipulated!

Dumbledore was the true dark lord.
He manipulated Harry even from beyond the grave with pensive memories.
Harry had no choice in where or who he lived.
No choice in his friends.
Even his wife Ginny was chosen for him.
Harry was not a hero but a puppet and victim.

I despise Dumbledore ... and Rowling for her gain off Harrys pain.
Rune Tobor chapter 26 . 7/14/2021
That the Ministry sent in someone to torture children and Dumbledore and the staff did nothing is Unforgivable!

Kill them all...
Rune Tobor chapter 25 . 7/14/2021
A really, really, really fun part of Avengers crossovers is messing with Fury!

Well done!
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