Reviews for Shatter, Naruto Uzumaki |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So WHY are the akutski interested AGAIN in naruto? And why/HOW do they know about an "attitude change"? AND WHO THE HELL CARES?! For a "secret organization", you sure seem to WANT THEM TO ATTRACT EVERY EYEBALL in the area!... They are supposed to BE HIDING! They can't use naruto right now, kyuubi needs added last and they have NO tailed beasts, and won't for YEARS! So AGAIN, why waste time sending the EXACT SAME ones they sent before, after him again? And FOR WHAT? How the hell does an "attitude change" in a certain situation get proven OR disproved? AND HOW DOES THAT MAKE A FLYING FIG about what they want? NONE of that makes any sense... Don't they have MORE IMPORTANT things to do? Like TRYING TO COLLECT ANY TAILED BEAST!? Because they can extract ANY of the others now! Oh and for just taking naruto and holding him for YEARS AND YEARS? That's just DUMB.. The kyuubi right NOW would make mince meat out of the ENTIRE organization... SO... There is that too. Plus naruto could at ANY TIME reverse summon to the toads OR bring jiraiya straight to them (and this is all CANON stuff.. Not the genjutsu stuff)... So yeah this is just bleeh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey hope your health has improved for a pain-free day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's not how basical punctuation works. quotation marksis used for speach. it's basic junior high school grammar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't underestimate the Ramengan, the dojutsu of the Sage of Six Bowls. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story so far please try to update whenever you can. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know why, but the use ofinstead offor conversation is irksome. I understand its not grammatical incorrect to do so, but it just feels wrong |
![]() ![]() ![]() still alive! Even though It's only one chapter every few months months or so, I am happy to see that this story is still kicking,and I'm super interested in seeing where the plot of Narutos and Tayuyas leads. Despite all this time,it's still very early in the story. I would love to see where you plan to take it. hopefully, we see more updates in the near future! thank you for the update and take care. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! An update! I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was that an unintended pun? " Danzo has more EYES" |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was hoping a new chapter was coming and was happily surprised this morning fantastic chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to Chapter 12. |
![]() ![]() ![]() didn't expect an update to this story tbh. glad it did though, especially if it won't be the only one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon |