Reviews for Crippled |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey howdy ho I like your concept it seems really cool and i like the way your handling the characters but to be completely honest after reading till half way through this chapter i just am to bored. Nothing happens other then whats in the synopsis and people talking. Dont gwt me wrong the story isnt bad its just theres no conflict or even like issei doing anything. he gets his numbers, learns magic, which hes like a God at, and just keeps going to school doing nothing for 4 chapters. if your willing to read further than me, this could be a great story, but i couldn't. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude.. are you even alive? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'An only child to Hyoudou Karin and Hyoudou Kuzuki' False, his mother's name is Miki and his dad is named Gorou. 'Ultimately, Sona was proud devil' should be 'Ultimately, Sona was a proud devil' 'It is, in it's basest form, the a force' should be 'It is, in its basest form, the force' |
![]() ![]() ![]() tftc |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to know if the author is okay, I hope so and that he can update at some point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was really enjoying this up till this point but I got so annoyed at how he's being used, manipulated and used as a toy calculator that's I can keep reading as I'm disgusted at it all, that he's going along with it and that it was written this way. So I'm out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was right. mc is weak. also the no killing thing is getting ridiculous. the mc is just supposed to sit there and take every attempt on his life like it didn't happen because what, potental war... offending someone they are already trying to kill you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() seems kinda pointless to make ur mc "powerful" if he never is. and don't get me wrong, your character isn't weak, but he is. Only strong enough to survive the next encounter. Seems like all the number stuff is just to speed up the learning process and make him look like a retard for not developing anything actually decent, the resorting to brute force which you said he wouldn't. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh thank god that everyone is alive and safe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job with this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is getting interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You can do it Issei. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent job with this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder which goddess Asama was?. |