While I don’t like the dark and angsty characters you’ve gone in the opposite direction and created a too sunshiny and naive character that’s just annoying. She seems one dimensional and doesn’t feel like a real person. The angsty characters feel more real.

i am so angry at the way a supposed 24 years old acted towards a 6 years old kid, who barely understands anything.. even with the knowledge she possessed. I was almost broken by the way he was treated and nearly in tears by how that affected little kabuto.

I feel terrible because i once made my little sister who was only 8 cry because of how i alienated her during one of our outings. its one of the things i regret the most, albeit i was only 15.

I'm not sure if you know this but you're absolutely amazing! This is one of the best Naruto fanfics I've had the fortune of reading. Thank you so much for sharing this, you beautiful human being! I hope you have a wonderful year! Thank you!

I definitely enjoyed this story a lot. It's very unlikely it'll ever be finished, but It's still very much worth a read.

The constant use of the word retarded is nauseating eugh

Wait …please don’t kill minato and kushina !:(

Cutest couple pfft, Minato Married his Village he'd gladly Sacrifice his Family for the Greater Good. If anything it's very convenient that Minato, the Future Hokage Married the Jinchuriki of Kurama yes very convenient.

why have Christian values follow over into the cultural hotpot of the naruto fandom...it seems a little out of place when theres tons of other "christan values" that have been ignored just by starting this life. and a licensed psychologist would know the benifits to healthy sexual relationships and experiences through life and fight to compat the double standards of the "no intimacy before marriage"...if she knows its good to cry from chapter 1 she should know its good to love too. that really just doesn't fit the character...authors should be caredul when they impart their own beliefs onto illfitting muses

When did Akito get the sharingan?

I want to like this story more than I do, by what the actual fuck dude? You know the word 'Stupid, Idiotic, Asining, Ignorant, etc.' All exist right? You didn't have to use the R slur for every fucking thing. Thats not like a cultural oopsie, thats like a deliberat choice on your part using that word. I can't believe you edited this in 2017, and you hadn't updated that part of the writing. You're reliance on the word Retarded is not just a sign of your own ignorance, but your poor writing skills. I hope you've improved on not just your writing, but your own humanity.

Bruh...
The Parenting Skills is Shtty like Damb!

Okay, this was one of the funnyest crack fic I've ever read.
I mean so illogical and yet not so much ? It's genius.
On the other side the main story is also a jewel.

A fantastic incredible extraordinairy fanfic !
And really heartwarming and funny too, will you put the musical next chapter ?

That was beyond weird...

It's currently August, she says, and yet October 10th is only 4 days away?
That makes no sense!