Reviews for Welcome To Tomorrow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It was particularly enjoyable to watch the payoff of Akito's PR work. Also, most naruto fics i've read are much more combat focused. This isn't surprising for fanfiction of a shounen manga, but you still periodically demonstrate that she is competent in shinobi skills without combat being a priority in your writing. I didn't realize it would be so refreshing to read something different in this way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just love how the two trios barged into Minato's meeting with Orochimaru like it's a comedy routine xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Been a long time this hasn't been updated so idk if this will continue anytime soon. But in the event it does, i rlly hope for another short story omake-like chapter. There were things that I felt weren't wrapped up properly. Like the fact minato wanted to privately talk to Fugaku about who gave the anonymous tip to evacuate during the boiling rain. Like am curious abt his thots when he finds out it's akito. Is he blasé abt it cuz she always just knows things, does he find her sus, does he think she's hiding something but knows she's not a threat so just accepts it. Another scene i'd like to see is akito talking to rin abt her avoidance of obito like she said she would. Unless she never got around to it. On another note, i feel kinda bad for yamato hahaha am hoping for the time to come where he is halpy with his life and he feels fulfilled(without being a complete couch potato like she wishes) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Flambé à la chidori? Omg lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this narrative voice. This story is adorably awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found and binged this. Fantastic story! Hope it isn't dead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, she’s a hero indeed. Damn I can just imagine Naruto or any shonen MC saying that cheesy stuff |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is delightful |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...sometimes, Supreme Being author, I wonder if you're crazy. Then I decide it doesn't matter because I'm crazy too. Maybe all us authors are crazy. On a different note, I nearly fell of my damn chair laughing. Imma sue you |
![]() ![]() ![]() IT'S STILL DAMN FUNNY and did you just use Sasuke's birth as a time period? Like we have AD BC... |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh- shisui, my heart hurts for you |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() The constant use of Japanese phrases is extremely annoying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() not sure why but this chapter made me tear up lol |