Hey, your story is great! I didn't know that aneki means older sister. I always thought it was aneue for older sister and aniki means older brother. I end up searching the correct way of using the family terms. Did you know that when one is talking to one's own parents, they called them chichi/haha with, without using -ue than using otou/okaa -san. Apparently it's suppose to be for other people parents instead of their own. Man...Japanese...

Anways, looking forward to your next update!

Oohh, big sister I can totaly understand!
Kids can be so magical (when they're not our own and not waking us up at ungodly hours)
Annndd I'm adoring all the relationships beng worked on this fic :)
Hanna

You are ... kyaaa!
I freaking love this story.
Great job!
Greetings! !

...Oh ma gah, you just killed Choji's Dad... but Choji's will still be born right..?
I wonder how will the boy change now that there won't be father to encourage him after he's been bullied... poor boy. QAQ

Danzo's trying to frame the Uchiha.
Won't work! Cuz the entire post-third war shinobi generation are the minions of the Uchiha heiress.

Lol I feel ya kushina it is indeed first world problems along with losing your internet connection while in the middle of a climax of a movie or anime god how I hate that . but now that choza is dead who is going to give choji all those talks . Akito I don't think it fits her , was choza even married before he died cuz if not then a big problem is here but if his wife was already pregnant then we have a smaller problem cuz in canon choza was the only parent of the ino-shika-cho squad that survived .

I think I smell Ne running rampant and the seeds of the Uchiha coup being sown...
I just want to tell you that this is the first fic I've ever read where Fugaku is a hilarious bad parent. This is just pure epic gold that has been spun into diamonds and then dyed with the colors of the wind. Yes. I love this fic; I think that it's probs the opposite of Aleycat4eva's "Of the river and the sea", where everything is hella dark and soooo good and the FEELZ. This fic is more towards humor (pretty dry and a good amount of dark) and a more entrenched biased clan view of Naruto. I'm rambling now. Bye!

Haha first world problems! Yay Minato is hokage! Thanks for updating!

Aw dang, Chouza! I don't really have any theories, but I do think a Konoha ninja did that. If its a foreigner, they could arrow someone else. Its gotta be pretty hard to kill four people of that level already.
Poor Chouji, I'm pretty sure his dad did have a huge role in his growing up. Chouji was with him and he and Shikamaru became friends, and if I remember correctly Chouza kept telling Chouji that it didn't matter if he was fat.
I really like the Fugaku here, he's so nice gah. All the family bonding and Fugaku being human.
Akito and Itachi leading the "YON-DAI-ME" cheer kind of tells everyone that they support Minato as Hokage and don't mind an Uchiha not being in that position, but eh, most of the population will probably brush it off as them being children who haven't got a clue about anything, regardless of how theyre raised by the leader of the clan suspected of wanting power and stuff.
The people listed as main characters is pretty suspicious though. Is Sasuke not going to be born? And Kabuto is probably going to drift away and not be involved in all the shenanigans.
I agree that the similarity between Kabuto and Nonou is very eerie. It feels like Kishimoto just got lazy designing a character.
How are the Uchihas even hailed as being very good shinobi when the children of their policemen, who have to be good to an extent, bang into walls?! The image is very cute and annoying at the same time, dear god what are these people thinking xD
Wow OK thats a very long review, but honestly your chapters are so long theres so much to say.

Will Minato uncover Danzo as the one responsible?

More there must be more! :)

I love this fic, KabutoxAkito x shisui i want lovely triangle

Absolutely amazing chapter! I can't wait to read more!

u r brilliant,Awesome-sama!
totally love the way you write..
Flambe a la Chidori !? i mean what the heck, thats too good, just brilliant..how the hell do you come up with such fantastic terms?
and baby itachi is sooo kawai!
pls dont mind me , i sound like a sugar-high gaki as well..but boy this is soo cool writing !
love the way you have portrayed Akito-chan n shisui and the efforts she is taking to prevent the clan massacre. also the way she became friend with Kabuto..
keep writing...

Honestly, I can not wait to read more of this story. I don't have nearly enough time just now to list all my reasons for this becoming a very quick, wholehearted favourite, but man. I may be in love.