Reviews for Evanescent
Alicia Olivia Mirza chapter 13 . 12/15/2016
Hey!
I love this story so far!
I dearly hope that you haven't given upon it yet!
Keep up the good work!

Alicia :)
PancakeNSyrup chapter 13 . 2/6/2016
Good job
ctc chapter 13 . 2/6/2016
round 2 not so good...
lilyflower1345 chapter 13 . 2/6/2016
Good chapter! I felt sorry for James at the end there, but they're both dealing with alot. Thanks for writing this
BookLover1182 chapter 13 . 2/6/2016
Love it and very interesting story please update when you can.
SlaveOfPassion chapter 12 . 1/26/2016
I like this story and where it's going.
Although I'm wondering if they're going to remember the exact details of "that night"...?
I hope you keep getting reviews to encourage you to write more! I know how writers block can be, it sucks, but reviews always seem to help!
Keep it up :)
lilyflower1345 chapter 12 . 1/24/2016
Thanks for the great chapter!
lilyflower1345 chapter 11 . 1/5/2016
great chapter! I liked the seeing James and Lily's dad get along and talk sports. I'm glad that her dad was supportive. Thanks for writing, I enjoyed this chapter :)
lilyflower1345 chapter 10 . 12/21/2015
great chapter! I loved seeing James be supportive and saying he'll do whatever Lily needs. Thanks for writing this!
Guest chapter 5 . 12/13/2015
PLEASE PLEASE I BEG YOU DONT MAKE LILY PREGNANT!PLEASE DONT MAKE HER PREGNANT
lilyflower1345 chapter 9 . 12/12/2015
Good chapter! I feel sorry for Lily though it makes sense James needs time to think. Thanks for writing this!
lilyflower1345 chapter 8 . 11/29/2015
Good chapter! I'm glad that Lily finally told James she's pregnant. James was cute trying not to joke. I'm excited to see his reaction. Thanks for writing this!
musicfan1346 chapter 8 . 11/28/2015
Poor James. He has been after her for so long and now that he had, he can barely remember the night they spend together. Not only that, but now he got Lily pregnant. His reaction is bound to be interesting.
SuraWaldelfe chapter 6 . 11/1/2015
Hey,

I really like your story so far & I'm excited to read more of it.
Will Lily tell her mum that she's pregnant over the winter holidays?
She will sooner or later start showing, more possibly later because it's her first baby and some woman don't really start showing until ca 6 month.

Please don't take to long with the next update :)
xXxVioletSkyxXx chapter 6 . 10/31/2015
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