Reviews for Potter vs Paradox
Guest chapter 41 . 1/21
A story with good grammar, obeying "show, don't tell," no bashing and entertaining to boot. This is precious and rare. Thank you for sharing it.

Still, if the author wishes to improve there's two things I could mention. One would be that after 137k words we haven't reached 2nd year yet. The story is being buried in minutiae.

Number two would be the constant tension. Hardly any levity and release of tension makes it difficult to read. I'm not talking about how dark the story is. Struggle and tension are mandatory, but perpetual tension is exhausting. Even Quidditch stopped being fun for Iris.

However this criticism is like saying that 95% is awesome and 5% questionable and should not be taken to heart. In the end, just have my thanks.
lynarizsajise1 chapter 30 . 12/17/2020
Omfg Dumbledore is babbling about how blood magic is bad and does it himself, bloody hypocrite.
Eragon135790 chapter 15 . 10/27/2020
is iris able to speak parseltounghe?
willam and jack and jake chapter 41 . 10/9/2020
very interesting can't wait to read more
willam and jack and jake chapter 40 . 10/8/2020
Dark and very well done
willam and jack and jake chapter 39 . 10/8/2020
nice
willam and jack and jake chapter 38 . 10/8/2020
I wonder how bad this is going to go
willam and jack and jake chapter 37 . 10/8/2020
I "wonder" who did that
willam and jack and jake chapter 36 . 10/8/2020
so iris's plan work out just not the way she thought it would
willam and jack and jake chapter 35 . 10/8/2020
very interesting
willam and jack and jake chapter 34 . 10/8/2020
uh oh not good
willam and jack and jake chapter 33 . 10/7/2020
I wonder who that is
willam and jack and jake chapter 32 . 10/7/2020
nice I wonder what Iris is going to do now
willam and jack and jake chapter 31 . 10/7/2020
uh oh not good
willam and jack and jake chapter 30 . 10/7/2020
cool well done
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