Reviews for Potter vs Paradox |
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![]() ![]() yeah the gold coin cliche would be sus already because theyre serial numbered. gringotts would not let her use that money in the first place lol so yeah gems and bullions are the key there, also time travel like this means that she should get the files in the offices right so yeah good idea right ter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well this was a gem. Sad to see it abandoned, but it was a fun read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope this story will continue |
![]() ![]() holy shit that was good |
![]() ![]() i love the magic in the beginning. i thought because you meant canon magic, it would be all reductors and bullshit but the way dumbledore used magic was so underrated you managed to create your own, i applaud you for that! i have so many ideas for a collection of spells that can be used in one and im so glad it came here! happy to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is plot and ur writing is awesome. I hope u continue the story |
![]() ![]() 'Prophesy' is a verb. The noun is 'prophecy', as it is correctly spelled in the books. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Actually, the thing about using the mirror was probably the only real trap and was perhaps the closest to "sensible" of anything involved. The reason being the way the mirror is described, how anyone with strong enough desire could end up wasting away in front of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione is almost a year older than Harry, very not "same age". Why do so many seem to "conveniently" forget that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, did something go wrong with the Magic, and 4 Privet Drive got mated with 12 Grimmauld Place, To make the unholy union called: Number 4 Grimmaluld Place ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHY... are they at number FOUR Grimmauld place? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well written story! I like it and hope you’ll continue it some day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ya I'm out Harry is a pathetic brat and boring |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here's the problem with this story... It's beautifully written but it's about a single character. With you sticking to the immaturity of 11 year olds there is no real change in any of the characters except Iris and even her story just doesn't seem to go anywhere. There is all these background plots going on that haven't actually gone anywhere or affected anything and so the only real thing that's happening is Iris is training... |
![]() ![]() I've just finished binging this, I greatly enjoyed it. I'd love to see more of it, is it dead or on hiatus? |