|Reviews for Code Lyoko: Rise of Xana|
| desgarbiuz chapter 20 . 5/27/2019
Para empezar hola soy Desgarbiuz y es un gusto para mi dejar este comentario, en segundo lugar me encantaron los 20 capítulos que haz subido me eh divertido en todos ellos y espero que continúes con esta historia, ahora no me lo tomes a mal pero me desagrada el hecho que casi todos los capítulos que subiste hay algunas partes que se repiten y eso no me gusta así que si puedes evitarlo en los próximos capítulos te lo agradecería muchisimo, pero como ya dije antes no me lo tomes mal y esperó que podamos ser amigos, bueno también quisiera que te pasaras a ver mis historias y que las leas y me digas que opinas, bueno Desgarbiuz se va así que nos veremos pronto con otro capítulo de esta historia así que adiós.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2017
Oh my god. you are such a good writer and your probably... fuckin... good looking too.
| swithinboy59 chapter 19 . 4/30/2016
This is amazing work, keep it up, it's so gripping I'm almost chewing on inanimate objects in fustration about having to wait for the next part
| CoreOfLyoko chapter 4 . 9/23/2015
I started reading this because my friend and I are writing a fanfiction that seemed, from the description, to be of a similar premise (As I have discovered, they are quite different, and I am delightedly surprised). I have read all of your chapters, mind, but I chose to leave a review on this one because it was as of this chapter that I was genuinely intrigued. I am very interested to see where this is going, and I want to learn more about your original characters. They read very believably as young boys (as I am assuming that they are supposed to be, same age as the kids in the original show) and though I don't feel like I know much about Seth or Noah yet I look forward to finding out.
If I could make one suggestion, I would ask that you consider breaking things up into a few more paragraphs. Such large blocks of text can be difficult to concentrate on at times. But, that's really your choice. Consider me on board to read either way. )
| Martyn chapter 4 . 9/8/2015
Can you do my idea for a Monster: Primes.
The Primes are the ground combats of the Monsters. They come in different varieties depending on the Sector. They have strong punches, but are twice as stupid as the Kankralats.
| ProjectTazProductions chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
Are you accepting charactets for ypur story