Damn. And right near the end too.

1) The Imperius doesn't need the death pf the caster or potions to break from what we see in the books and movies
2) Surely Dumbledore has been given enough second chances already I don't get why he hasn't been kicked out of the school

Wait what happens when he dies? if it connects to him surely that means that if he dies it goes down right?

What about updating Muggle Studies and making it compulsory for all Magical raised (Pure-Bloods, Half-bloods etc.) and also creating a Wizarding Studies class (That teaches about magical culture and
etiquette) that is compulsory for all those raised in the Muggle world (Muggleborns & Half-bloods)

A Mind Message? that's pretty silly

and how are they able to use elf apparition surely that would be something only elf magic can do?

1) How did people find out about Daphne pushing Astoria down the stairs I mean that sounds like it could easily be called a accident by the family to stop people finding out about it

2) When did Daphne and Harry become Girlfriend/Boyfriend? Did I skip over a bit in this chapter or the last one?

What are these numbers about Voldys soul they are gibberish why not say like 5% of his soul or something?

Oh, great, another pathetic spineless character who is so unbelievably unrealistic. He just learned he was lied to and was stolen from constantly, and his first reaction is to let them have the money since they need it more, and for whatever reason he's got a billion galleons. I'm not wasting any more of my time on this story

Brilliant thank you for a great story

Yo this dude/gal commenting as 'guest' has to be clinically insane. They have got to come back to reality, lay off fan fictions for a while and chill the f down.. I hope you pay these inbred wankers no mind...

And Harry refusing to kill the big baddies just proves how stupid he is. Just like stupid hero stories and cliches. Hero’s storm the bad guys base killing all the underlings and people who are mostly just paid to be there. Yet the hero always refuses to kill the actual evil. Instead insisting they don’t want to be as evil as the bad guy. This is very very stupid. Any writer for tv or books who does this is fucking retarded and should be beaten to within an inch of their life if not killed flat out. This type of thinking is evil and wrong. It only makes victims. Beyond fucking stupid.

Harry has a very good point and daphne was completely in the wrong. And then she makes it out line it’s on Harry? What a bitch! Harry can do better.

Hedwig deserves to die. She obviously cares more about a stranger owl than Harry’s own life. Traitor owl. Harry deserves to die for being stupid and spineless.

Couldn't they just use telepathy to communicate with each other? Or does that take up to much magical energy and focus?

You have a habit of talking about random ass shit that slightly relates to the story to explain the story; such as the cart ride with Daphne,