|Reviews for Memories Of Others|
| Emma chapter 19 . 7/12
And that was the day Jiraiya of the Legendary Sannin became the second fastest man on earth...
| Guest chapter 60 . 7/8
Just a point out, irrespective of you stating that the chances of you continuing this is slim.
Back in the early part of the story, during the Betrothal Contract stipulations, you put down.
Either 16 OR if both had achieved the rank of chuunin as requirements for them to get hitched.. With their promotions in the last chapter, you've set off the Betrothal Contract, meaning any followup chapter would have to deal with the fallout of that.
Especially, considering how "eager" Hinata is to move things along.
In addition by having him trained by Jiraiya, you've set up Naruto for the Betrothal Match with Shizuka of Nadeshiko (from one of the fillers).
Considering you've already done one Harem with Hinata, Ino and Shion in your Guyver story, just wanted to point that out.
| Tare-chan chapter 60 . 7/5
oh wow... this story was amazing! i really like how you could stay to the original story, yet put the twist here and ther, and give enough chara development so it make sense. nice story... it's a shame you had writters block, cause i would love to see the continuation. nice job nevertheless...
| Tare-chan chapter 6 . 7/1
this story is somehow interesting. following the original, yet has some twist here and there. a little bit ooc-ness detected though. but, at some place, i believe it is needed. interesting... i will continue reading it
| Capacity chapter 13 . 6/23
Please write a sequel! I already love this story!
| soomeru chapter 1 . 6/14
I read through it and I'm literally dying for a sequel. It's just that good.
| Aqua Aquana chapter 5 . 6/3
Finally a story where at least someone copies kakashi's style of introduction!
| Slimstats chapter 8 . 5/24
I'm sorry. My last review was slightly flaming and I apologize. I started this story with a closed off mind thinking that this was not going to be a good story and I was nitpicking. In actuality it's very interesting and your writing style is pretty good. Please keep writing and sorry again.
| Slimstats chapter 2 . 5/24
How did Iruka lose to mizuki if he's an A rank bordering s rank. That means he's as strong as Kakashi and Gai. A chunin wouldn't have gotten a scratch on him even if it was Iruka's worst day.
| Anaelyssa chapter 60 . 5/23
It was nice to read...
| Anaelyssa chapter 59 . 5/23
| Anaelyssa chapter 58 . 5/23
| Anaelyssa chapter 57 . 5/23
| Anaelyssa chapter 56 . 5/23
A fan of Jiraiya... wow.
| Anaelyssa chapter 55 . 5/23
*Sigh* this mission again...