Reviews for Memories Of Others
Alice Scarlett Knabel chapter 4 . 1/9
dono is for other lords Ko is a branch member he isn't a lord sama should be the title
miss-direct836 chapter 20 . 1/2
Never thought I'd see the day where Hiashi pranks Jiraiya...
Zeke Hooper chapter 60 . 10/30/2024
good story.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/12/2024
"Wall-walking already? Now who taught you that?"
The way he had phrased it suggested that he had known about the way that Naruto's learning had been sabotaged.

How the hell does that suggest any such thing? It's something that isn't taught in the academy, so Naruto knowing it is not something anyone would have expected. The question is therefore perfectly sensible. And it doesn't reveal anything about what did or didn't happen in the academy with the regular curriculum.

Just another pathetic attempt to heap undeserved hatred on a character whom you decided you want to hate.

Just like how you portrayed Sakura like a spoiled bitchy two-year-old brat. Nothing like she usually was in canon - when not provoked by Naruto in some way, like him harassing her once again about a date or him essentially bullying Sasuke in one way or another, when Sasuke only wanted to be left alone.
Do you even remember that Naruto thought nothing of assaulting Sasuke in his own home, tying him up (essentially breaking and entering, assault and kidnapping), using Henge to turn into Sasuke and then essentially trying to sexually assault Sakura? At least in the beginning of the series, it was Naruto who was the asshole of those three, not the others. They were just kids/teens.

Let me guess: You have some perfectly perfect excuses ready to explain away that behavior of Naruto? Like him never having a moral compass or something? Been there, heard that, disregarded it. Even if it were true, that doesn't make his behavior alright. If anything it gives Sakura even more valid reasons to hate him and aggressively keep him away from her: Because it would mean that he isn't just annoying but actually *dangerous*.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/12/2024
Why have Naruto's clones practice water walking and tree walking at the same time? Water walking is more advanced. Having them practice that before having the tree walking mastered is just a waste of clones - which, thanks to that made-up brain damage BS, are already so limited.

Iruka is A-ranked? Did you smoke any mushrooms of unknown origin? Iruka didn't even manage to get Naruto out of that giant shuriken's way without getting struck in the back himself. That's pathetic. Sasuke as a fresh rookie genin would have managed better. Iruka being able to catch Naruto... that was once, if I remember correctly, not "always". And, if anything, it was because he knows Naruto.

What you and so many other fanfic authors call the "Hokage's Tower" is actually just the academy building, where part of the administration, including the Hokage's office are located too. Gives the students additional protection by very close proximity to one of the best-secured parts of Konoha. Apparently one of Tobirama Senju's better ideas.

And what you did with Sakura is just pathetic and shows how little I can apparently expect from this fic's characters:
- The way she's acting towards Hinata? Never happened in canon. She has a problem with other Sasuke fangirls for obvious reasons and with Naruto - because he is constantly doing to her what is essentially sexual harassment, even if constantly asking her out and believing her firm "No"s mean "Ask me again in five minutes." is not on the same level as most of those things that are usually considered sexual harassment. If she has a problem with Naruto acting that way, and considering that saying "No" obviously isn't working, she is well within her rights to use other means of responding to his advances. Sakura, however, does not have any issues with Hinata, who isn't a Sasuke fangirl. Hinata also most likely was one of the strongest in taijutsu in their class, considering her clan training, which probably also included ninjutsu training and lots of the other non-practical stuff. She most likely was reasonably close behind Sakura with overall grades and probably better than her in taijutsu. If Sakura calls her "weak", she could just as well say "I'm so pathetic that I constantly lost against a weakling.". And Hinata also wouldn't have had much reason to hold back at all in the academy. She only held back against Hanabi, because she didn't want to hurt her little sister.
- Kurenai's "fangirl" judgement is also absolutely pathetic. "She likes a boy, therefore she's obviously a fangirl and therefore useless."? Seriously? Because that's exactly what she's saying here, without really knowing anything about her. Just a really pathetic quick way to get some authority (a jonin after all) to agree with you and confirm what you want to believe about Sakura.
Let me guess: More stupid bullshit ahead about certain other often-bashed characters? Like Sasuke being a spoiled self-entitled little shit, believing he has to get taught anything he demands, like the Shadow Clone Technique? (completely ignoring that canon Sasuke never once did that kind of thing) Or like Kakashi not teaching anything to his team? (despite training obviously just not being shown but happening "off-screen", simply because it would be boringly repetitive, and despite the other rookie teams obviously not having been taught anything in particular either by their senseis that Kakashi failed to teach his team; or are you angry that your darling Naruto didn't get taught the most awesome techniques within the first few days - and that only because he had crap chakra control and also almost no actual shinobi skills and therefore needed lots of basics training first?)

And probably also that ridiculous cliche of Tenten working in a weapons shop - probably her family's? Do you realize that in canon Tenten didn't have a family name (and therefore no family either)? In the preliminary round of the chunin exams the screen does not show any family name for her - but for everyone who has a family name it does show it.
Also, if her family has a weapons store, why on Earth would she then, as seen in Shippuden, first try to find a different specialization, like medical ninjutsu, rather than instantly going for weapons?

And let's not forget that asinine idea of "We need to keep this ability to clone others a secret - and now let's prank Hiashi Hyuga with it.". Yeah, that's decidedly NOT how you keep a secret, by sharing it with others just for fun.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2024
Ugh, that brain damage crap again. That's entirely non-canon, you know? Mental fatigue transfers over to the original. In other words: The need to rest or even sleep. That's all. No brain damage. That fatigue would be a perfectly sensible explanation for not overusing that technique, if you absolutely need such an explanation.
Zero4590 chapter 7 . 9/21/2024
Bashing can be great if done right.
Zero4590 chapter 2 . 9/21/2024
Hiashi not an asshole. Good.
TheGoodDoctor13 chapter 50 . 8/19/2024
For those curious, Okojo is Japanese for Stout. A stout is more a less a bigger weasel, which related to Itachi's anbu name of Weasel
TheGoodDoctor13 chapter 49 . 8/19/2024
Sasuke actually getting Therapy while also getting stronger, love to see it
TheGoodDoctor13 chapter 39 . 8/19/2024
The konohomaru crew being Rock Lee fans instead of Naruto ones is pretty funny, they're all wearing the spandex too
TheGoodDoctor13 chapter 30 . 8/18/2024
I completely forgot Iwa put Naruto in their bingo book during Wave, that's why it spread. Also unfortunate for Lee he went up against a sound genjutsu user, won't be getting a Gaara v lee in the finals then dang
TheGoodDoctor13 chapter 25 . 8/18/2024
Surprised nobody called Kabuto out during his cards for knowing Naruto can use Hiraishin. Some of the genin there (team 8 comes to mind) knows it's an S class secret and only a handful of leaf Shinobi actually know he can do it. Kabuto shouldn't have that knowledge since it isn't public and he's a random genin to their minds
TheGoodDoctor13 chapter 12 . 8/18/2024
Cute chapter
TheGoodDoctor13 chapter 9 . 8/18/2024
I don't get the whole "Minato has enemies so they'll try to kill you if you knew Naruto" thing hiruzen does. I guess it's true on some level but surely since literally every villager who isn't a child knows Naruto has the Kyuubi then some "enemies" would've tried to kill konohas jinchuriki already. If 0 outside people are trying to kill the strongest biju container or are unable to then nobody's getting to Naruto for being minatos kid
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