"That doesn't make any sense." Naruto groused. "Why would he ask for me? Was I supposed to be Sasuke's Eternal Rival in order to boost his progress or something? Sakura's punching bag to help her with her taijutsu?"
Sadly that was what happened or would have been happened

Toyboy?
Do you mean boytoy?

God damn it Shikamaru and his big mouth

Nice I can’t remember the story name but one story somebody lost a fight by tripping down the stairs and knocking themselves out

What a well written fight. Most authors would have written Lee wiping the floor with Kin. But you thought out the scene so well. Amazing.

its good but not my cup of tea, 15/60 dropped

Buena historia me gusta

Apart from rushed kiddie romance, this story is a fun read.

Naru Hina's behavior in the classroom was cringe-worthy. A week ago they were acquaintances and now they're acting like a lovey-dovey couple?! That too in the classroom?! Hinata's comment to Sasuke was overly harsh and very OOC for the kind girl she is supposed to be. Sakura's character feels like a caricature.

naruto is being kinda paranoic,but considering he is a ninja being paranoid is a good thing

I love it! thanks for the amazing story!

Great Ending, I enjoyed the way you tied up loose ends and also left an opening for a sequel if you felt up to it. I personally prefer the first part of naruto, so I am kinda happy you ended it right here. The way that Ino finally managed to get Naruto in one of her traps, using the lemons and paperclips was very Cathartic, and helped me relax.
Anyways, its time for me to go on the Voyage of one of your other fanfics, as this one was high quality and I can't wait to see what else you have. Bon Voyage!

fucking cringe

Good story

Please don’t let the bashing be super bad.