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Bad grammar, spelling errors, too short.

This was very short and so full of promise and emotion, are you gonna continue? :) or is it a oneshot?

In the first paragraph, so short and heart wrenching, you show really well the heart break but also the day to day reality of losing everyone, his clan, his family and his identity, support group, everything. Its a pretty terrifying reality for someone who was so young and seeing how you'd have him cope with that through empathising would be interesting.

The sentence "Sasuke Uchiha desires to not be alone." was a good turning point here, shepherding him away from revenge and a dark and lonely path and to the support of others, it would be good to hear about how this works out for him. How talking releases him and maybe any set backs, as he'd be in a very vulnerable place.

You have a cool premise and set it out well, I would hope there could be more to follow as I like your writing style. The choppy sentences and emotive parts really draw me in :)

I hope to see more of this. :)