|Reviews for The Definition of Normal|
| fleah2 chapter 75 . 3/5
I cried when it ended. I wanted more.
| ms.ladyaries08 chapter 75 . 3/3
This story was amazing and so well written
| ProditorMagnus chapter 20 . 2/18
Its unreasonable to expect Peter had forgotten Padfoot. He should have tried to fight or escape before reaching shop.
| BlazeStryker chapter 22 . 2/12
Given my Policy, you can imagine I would suspect this, but I really do have to wonder in a Headbastard type would have set compulsions in Molly Prewitt Weasley so she blasts everyone with Howlers to better hear of everything others find out; a red-headed alert system.
| renowned-warrior chapter 75 . 1/20
For most parts, this story was a good and exciting story. Many funny details, good plots and believable characters. There were a few small details along the way which were somewhat deficient, but it takes a lot of work to make everything equally good.
However, I think the story began to limp two-thirds into it and in particular the last five chapters were decidedly inconsequential and ended up for me to appear more as an attempt to keep something alive down artificial respiration, which I think is a pity.
| renowned-warrior chapter 53 . 1/19
35 degrees! Wow that's warm! I wouldn't recommend a blanket with that. But is that probable even in early november?you are aware that they use celsius in the UK and not fahrenheit?
| TennysonPoet chapter 61 . 1/9
I think some of the $$ should have gone to the Weasley family rather than Ginny. Yes she was impacted but the threat wasn't targeted to her but rather to the family itself.
| Hermione.G 2.0 chapter 53 . 1/5
Oh my goodness. Isn't this overdoing it?
| Hermione.G 2.0 chapter 38 . 1/2
Again: Why are you making Ron so lazy? And rude? And making him look as if he's dumb? He just has a short attention span and has a few troubles in school, that's all. That's fine. Not EVERYONE has to be good at something. I sense a fight breaking out between Harry and Ron.
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/30/2021
I read the title of this chapter and started humming that Wiggles song, the one about glasses. Yuck.
| Hermione.G 2.0 chapter 4 . 12/29/2021
Ok, no Weasley bashing. Good.
| Hermione 2.0 chapter 1 . 12/29/2021
Wait. Is this Ron bashing? I only say that because, and I quote, 'he was delighted to see it was from Hermione'. Mind you, he never said anything like that towards the Weasleys. Soooo...…
I just don't agree with bashing. Not that this is a bad story. It's perfectly fine right now.
| jaqmaq77 chapter 75 . 12/23/2021
it was good while it lasted. I was hoping that it was going to go one more year - finally giving Harry his hearts desire - a quiet year... and the trip to the world cup... could have met Fleur while camping... little romance and flirting. Pen pals leading to more later... (Oops... guess who likes H/Fleur...) No Tri Wiz... just boredom... till he gets kidnapped by Fleur... Sorry... my bad... almost took you to an 'M'... "Naughty Fleur, untie 'arry from zat bed and give him back 'is clothes..." "But Mama... It ez 'Arry Potter... can we not keep 'im." "Do not look at me with those puppy eyes... oh, ok, but just a month or so... then 'e' as to go 'ome."
| jaqmaq77 chapter 72 . 12/23/2021
wow, Harry really should care about money - with that kind of Philanthropist mindset he will be bankrupt before he graduates...
It was a strange chapter... Money, money, money, must be funny, in the wizard world... Ra Ra rice pudding, a dish that Dobby is serving, now that's a dish, soon to be gone...
Ok, ok... I'll stop... that last curse just missed me...
| jaqmaq77 chapter 71 . 12/23/2021
A very good travelogue advert for a visit to Italy... but no trip to Pisa? Now, Rome is nice but Pisa is Bellissimo, and for a wizard, seconds away from Rome. Like 200 mile drive, (I did it on the bike - Italian drivers are crazy...) if memory serves, Sicily is 5 or 6 hundred miles from Rome - Frisco to L.A. and half way back... Rome to Pisa and Rome to Sicily is all west coast.
Interesting... but the Angel hair spag bol is to die for... and Italian soft cheese...