Reviews for The Definition of Normal
jaqmaq77 chapter 35 . 12/22/2021
Once again five interesting chapters. Writing is excellent and the plot is great - I like your version of Dumbles, and can't wait to see his next move.
(Why do I have the picture of Mr Burns steepling his fingers and saying 'Excellent' in my mind?) Oh, damn... now I got Harry played by Bart Simpson, Hermione, Lisa, and for some reason Ron is being played by Ralph Wiggam... Nooo! Draco played by Nelson Muntz... Please, shoot me now...
jaqmaq77 chapter 30 . 12/22/2021
Excellent chapters. Well thought out and well written, I'm still enjoying the story.
jaqmaq77 chapter 20 . 12/21/2021
Loved 18, 19, and especially 20... finally caught the rat. But I was very surprised that Peter never took off in the Leaky... he had to recognise Paddy and wolfie? He was with them right through school all the way to October 81? I mean Siri saw a picture in a paper and escaped.
jaqmaq77 chapter 17 . 12/21/2021
Oops... and my review of 16 was answered in 17... its really strange reviewing stories that are long completed, but this is so good and so interesting I want to review every chapter... but I think 20 next and then mayhap every 5 or so...then I won't be bringing up points that were long since answered...
jaqmaq77 chapter 16 . 12/21/2021
Still reading and still finding it a great story.
I'm a bit confused with the timeline - the 'remove Horcrux' must be coming up but as I said I have lost track.
jaqmaq77 chapter 14 . 12/21/2021
Loved it, and Dobby doing messages plus popping people... not saw that in a while... think my favourite on Elf mail and Elf popping was 'Harry Potter and the Daft Morons'
I wish I could find the story where the Elves teach Harry their magic, I would have loved to read it again.
jaqmaq77 chapter 13 . 12/21/2021
Brilliant, and had me chuckling at the end. Really good Chapter, well written and quite fun.
jaqmaq77 chapter 12 . 12/21/2021
Aw... I thought they would call Dobby the second he was mentioned. Don't you just love Dobby... and Winky... I even like Kreacher.
But Hermione's gonna rant...
I had a friend like Kreacher... crazy and muttered nasty things about people - but unlike K he was all smiles to their faces.
I also had a mate like a mix of Dobby and Colin C... a bouncy, full of energy camera nut... When he found out I had my own studio and darkroom... he almost hyper-ventilated to death... I swear he was still vibrating a week later...
jaqmaq77 chapter 11 . 12/21/2021
Good chapter - not too fast and not too slow, and just enough technical details that it stayed believable...
I love the stories where the Goblins transfer the Horcrux to a pig and have a feast. I read one a while ago where they had Goblin warriors fight the possessed swine in a pit and made a party of it...
jaqmaq77 chapter 8 . 12/21/2021
love the twists and turns in this story... even to the point I dropped another story to read this one. Only realised I had got so engrossed in it, I read the first five chapters before I realised I hadn't reviewed.
jaqmaq77 chapter 5 . 12/21/2021
Great story - but you missed an error. chapter - they arranged to meet Griphook at ten... Remus just told Sirius he was meeting at nine. not a problem, but just thought I'd say.
Guest chapter 14 . 12/18/2021
Riiiight...he weighs so much that he needs to cut back on calories...sure...
Heinz-Lee chapter 75 . 12/12/2021
Thanks for this brilliant story. I enjoyed it a lot. Who does Harry marry in your universe?
honeycat chapter 68 . 11/28/2021
hi, this is in no way a criticism as I am a fanfiction nut BUT I just want to say that as a brit and in particular a scot (scottish person) I would like to point out that we have only a vague idea of what s'mores are as they are not eaten in this country at all. Having read so much fanfiction I assume that graham crackers are what WE call DIGESTIVE BISCUITS.
I would appreciate americans trying to find out these things as Harry Potter is actually set in Great Britain and in particular Scotland.

Thanks, keep up the good work. Love the story.
Bjalf chapter 55 . 11/15/2021
If you could not have Hermione use Harry's full name, that'd be nice. It sounds like she's trying to be a mother figure to Harry.
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