Arrogant, oberpoweted for literally no character develooment, mc pandering every five lines, literally every bad part sbout an op character in this fic. The onoy reason ive gotten this far is because ive skipoed jalf the chapters cuz it all boils down to “omg this kid is so amazing, we need him, lets get even moelre shocked when he does things others cant and is an arrogant little shit, lets praise him, omg hes so cool”

Ah yes lets not arouse suspicion, but lets also make hom able to beat the crap out of the 8 tails, and compre him to madara fighting the fourth shinobi army at like what 8 years old?

Madara was also the head of the uchiha clan who had gotten the rinnegan. He was like 45-50 years old, and had fought in the warring clans era. He was NOT a literal child two weeks into his trwining beating up on one of the most powerful characters in the series.

Wayyy to much op mc pandering.

Bit too much of “op kid syndrome” in kumo right now

I really hope that at some point old percy and this new percy merge aka the old one was much more abouy physical power while this one seems to be a much more mentally driven power judging by 1) experiences and 2) genjutsu mastery

I really hope after the fight hagoromo seals away indras and ashuras power again

Best story on this app

Best story I've read on this app

Back again to say your story is genuinely amazing

what the fuck do you mean "felt his world shatter" even according to him he's been assassinating people for years

could have been a good read, but I just can't read this. Why bother to keep changing things in another review? I saw he was op to mediocre when I searched for a Naruto x percy jackson. I expected Naruto to be the main focus I would receive, changing it to be a percy jackson crossover instead of a naruto one

This is, without a doubt, the most drawn-out fight I've ever read. At this point, I'm actively skipping 90% of the fight. I've never read something so repetitive and boring in my life.

man I gotta say, I left this story in the back of my to read list and I read most of your newer works but to know from where you started to where you are there is so much improvement it's amazing

you’re gonna experience crushing defeat before kicking major ass…. love the writing