|Reviews for On The Other Side|
| Claywind chapter 1 . 12/5/2016
This story gives me the impression of being written from end to beginning. So I tried re-reading it from bottom to top and it was actually making more sense chronologically.
I know I’m weird.
Belial is still a wonderful fluff-inducing plot device.
The tattoos are nice, but what you did with them – regarding to Judal’s emotions – was impressive.
I’m still unsure as to whether Judal remembers more than Hakuryuu. Considering Aladdin seems to know more than he should and expect Judal to… I’ll assume the magi remember more stuff. But Judal doesn’t know he is a “grand sorcerer of creation”, even if he can apparently create cosmic cupcakes. This is confusing. But fun.
Their interactions are extremely cute and feel genuine. You did an amazing job with both this and “Done with Endings”.
I had a lot of pleasure reading them, so thank you for sharing your stories with the internet.
| nistley chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
Thanks for sharing your works ! )
| Meno Melissa chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
You really should make this into a series. I don't particularly like JuHaku but your story is beautiful and gives me second thought bout the pairing.