|Reviews for That Soulmate Thing|
| Uncomfortable chapter 2 . 9/16/2015
This fic was going so great. It was heart breaking and romantic and just plain intresting.
But then Bruce talks with Dick and you cross the line. The "he cheated because you arn't trying hard enough" line is what people in bad relationships tell themselves in order to justify staying with the cheater. That just makes everything up to that point feel dirty. Like you're excusing Wally for his bad actions and blaming them on Dick.
I was honestly expecting this to end in a heart breaker where Wally ends up with Artemis and Dick only has platonic love in his life. That would have made a dramatic tale of lost love instead you excuse actions that are horrible, if not legitimately inexcusable.
If this is something personally relivent to you and your life, I'm so sorry something like this happened to you or someone you know, but that end seemed really forced and just turned the entire story rotten.