|Reviews for The Raven's Fox|
| Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 4 . 9/26
You tell her Naruto! Keep it up this is very interesting and keeps me wanting more. (I'd love to see her end up separated from Jon and end up with Dany for a while and maybe see one of her dragons bond with her spitfire self. Would be cool for her and Dany to be friends. Perhaps Naruto could ground Dany, keep her from becoming mad with power.
| Trickster79 chapter 4 . 6/22
Ugggghhh, how I hated Cat for being so irrational and hateful. Like, yeah, I know that in her mind, Jon was the living embodiment of how Need had cheated on her. But if she really knew Ned she would not have believed him to cheat on her and neither would have she behaved so bad if only Ned would have also come out with the truth sooner. I mean, it wasn't like Cat would have said anything aloud to the first one who asked, but then again, she was very silly by jumping into conclusions based on rumours/false information and kick-starting the war.
I know this fic has Jon as her pairing which okay, it does seems legit that Jon would harbour some feelings after having her protect his "honour" so fiercely, but I really think that her perfect suitor would have been someone from either Dorne or some commoner/knight. Life in court doesn't suit her at all. I expect her to travel around the realms making friends wherever she goes and eventually meeting both Brienne and Lysa Mormont. Imagine an all-female team Badass!
As for making her save everyone, it's impossible unless she already dominates the hirashin. After all even with her clones, someone is bound to die (probably a lot of people.) Who do I want her to save: Ned of course, Lady, Tommen, Mircella, Shireen, Renly and Oberyn to say some of my favourites. Of course, this isn't really realistic since her loyalty is limited to the Starks and I don't believe her so goody-goody to go and save everyone who is in danger. So really, it's up to you to change the canon however you see it fit. ;
Thanks for sharing :)
| Pokiilame chapter 4 . 6/21
I love this! Please update
| ROSARIOgamer chapter 4 . 6/16
Me encata subelo pronto
| Eriska627 chapter 3 . 5/17
Please update them
| Eriska627 chapter 2 . 5/17
Oh and the cloudies sky
| Eriska627 chapter 1 . 5/17
GNfreak please update the sky protector and the son of whirlpool please
| eragon95159 chapter 4 . 5/14
Continue and update Naruto leanr arya how open chakra and how use change westrons to better in procese save stark uzumaki family as new house of united seven kingdoms is defeaded night king with much lesses looses on with arya build new order in westrons(shinobi/kunoichi) .She make sestrou progress and Bright some traditional from her home like remove shoes when enter into house .and more.
| Silvia chapter 4 . 3/27
Please update, this is by far my favorite story on this whole site. I love how you managed to make Naruto mature while still maintaining her childishness
| AlanaSG711 chapter 4 . 12/22/2018
You tell her...
| ms.meow1968 chapter 4 . 12/4/2018
As never watched the game of thrones this whole story is pretty good and really cool I like how Naru just looks at people and tells them from the heart how he truly feeling and his response to most people are relitive direct. If you ever post another chapter have it where naru finds the big scroll and learns shadow clone. thanks for listening
| prankster-at-heart chapter 4 . 11/18/2018
I love this story! I think it has a lot of potential. You’re portrayal of the characters (especially Naruto) is very authentic. I hope you continue with the story. I’m excited to see where the story goes.
| Darth revan1998 chapter 4 . 11/16/2018
Please update z
| SeraphNoir chapter 4 . 8/5/2018
can you change the description to say abandoned if you have no intentions of updating
| Morning Songbird chapter 1 . 4/12/2018
this is amazing, please update