Reviews for The Fine Line Between Love And Hate (Rewrite)
DittoWebb chapter 7 . 1/2
OMG your stories are amazing! Plz update when possible
Balerus the black dread chapter 7 . 11/10/2019
Bro this is so good! Update epic story and the u told love story between Artemis and Perseus is amazing and Percy’s origin story !:)
BRUH chapter 7 . 11/2/2019
Fuck ye dude can't wait for this to be updated, it's got a really and incredibly good writing :D
Ariadne.queen.of.the.seas chapter 5 . 3/16/2019
please keep going i love this story can you put some more apolloxhestia
The Real Virgin Goddess Harem chapter 7 . 2/23/2019
thumbs-up 4 good work
rescue 007 chapter 7 . 2/21/2019
Update then. Don’t just tell us you will...
HephaestusBuilds chapter 7 . 2/20/2019
I have never read this story before but I'm now officially in love with it, it's really interesting and I like having Percy and Artemis together-ish from the beginning.
Have a great day,

Hephaestus
Ariadne.queen.of.the.seas chapter 7 . 2/20/2019
thanks
Ariadne.queen.of.the.seas chapter 6 . 2/17/2019
love this so much please keep going
TheRealGoddessArtemis chapter 6 . 1/14/2019
UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Guest chapter 6 . 1/10/2019
UPDATTTTEEE PLSSSS
Bloodrage20 chapter 6 . 1/7/2019
Love this one if not the best Artemis and perseus fanfiction out there
DarkGamer159 chapter 6 . 9/10/2018
This is a great story! i've seen this kind of format before (where both artemis and percy have a group of 'huntersbut those stories didn't really do this format justice, they were all half backed. this one instead is fantastic, seeing both artemis and percy struggle with their rage and hatred, but not wanting to tell how they truely feel because that would mean thar rhe other might turn them down, and their hearths couldn't take that.
also the added mystery of their past is a great addition.

Now it's my fafourite part of reviews: Idea timepercy and artemis can't be together and all because of Zeus and Hera, the only people standing between true happiness for both of them. Percy sent to earth by his father to protect them never dared to take serious action because 1) it was his job to protect them even if he didn't like them. 2) his father would be dissapointed, and percy would never let that happen.

but after artemis and percy have their hot and steamey night together (end of chapter 6, begin of chapter 7 which has not been written yet) they wake up, with a blissed feeling. they can work toghter now (al be it with a bit of bickering, but they have found that passion back) and that is just what zues wanted, no problems for him. but that was also it. he doesn't want it to go further then 'friends', friends that qay hey to each other in passing by but don't really talk to each other but certainly don't fight with each other. so that percy is still tied to Olympus but only as guardian and not as lover.

when aphrodite hears zeus talks about this with hera, she doesn't know what to do. tell percy or not, because the consequences would be grave if she did.

but not a day later zeus calls another meeting. a meeting where he maipulates everyone to decide to relieve percy and artemis feom working together. once everyone agrees with this because noone sees the hidden meaning behind the words because they are too happy that everything can be normal again, zeus announcesthat percy's services are no longer recuired and that he can not interfere with artemis' upmost important workafter the meeting everyone feels betrayed by zeus manipulations and are angry with him, but they can't do anything about it. Now aphrodite has is suffering from guilt so she tells percy and artemis the conversation she overheard between zeus and hera, and this makes them angry. so angry that they decide to see each other behind zeus back.

this goes on for a few months untill zeus hears of what has happend (percy and arty going behind his back) and decides to punish percy, using the power of veto to over rule everyone else. (in rome they could only use this once per year, here zeus can do it like once per decenia or eaon) and he strips perceus of his title of olympian guardian and banishes him from earth, bercy has a month to say goodbye to everyone and leave the earth, it doesn't matter to zeus where he goes (tartarus, the underworld, space, another planet) just that he is gone. percy dicides that enough is enough and because he is released from his job he is getting more and more memories of his life before olympus back.

after a month spending time with different gods (most artemis) he decides to go to the underworld where he can start his plans. together with minorgods and olympians he starts a 'battle' between the king and queen of the gods (no not a battle with powers or swords, but one for the throne of olympus, one where the gods chose percy as their king, artemis as their queen instead of zues and hera, the coeeupted rulers) and percy coördinates all this from the shadow witht the help of the gods to stay hidden in the world (and underworld) where artemis would visit percy almost every night. percy uses the powers of all the allies he's made (well not really allies but more like zeus' enemies, yes he plays dirty so even monsters and punished immortals who hate zeus) to hide in plain sight. sometimes as an ordinary human, sometimes as a demi god. using the underground cave system called the labyrinth to travel and concele his powers, and hidden in the sea, and underworld awy fom zeus watching eye and his birds.

but not only zeus has his spies, percy has too his foredt annimals talk to him whenever they see zeus or hera in the forest taking a walk, talking like there is no one looning, half the olympian counsil infiltrated with allies. and his warrior under guidance of this best friend appollo, who sees everything the sun touches and artemis everything the moon lights up. where artemis goes every night to percy, be it as his is desguising as a mortal, in the underworld, a demigod, or when he visits her when doing her duty at her camp or in the chariot.

but apollo is more a decoy to not make suspicion because artemis takes the warriors (unofficially) over and they start working together to a better tomorrow one where the sky isn't the ruler of all and to stop the tirany. and maybe there is a little love between the two luitanants becau
Guest257 chapter 5 . 9/3/2018
I'm sorry but I can't figure out what she did to Perseus
Guest chapter 6 . 8/4/2018
Update soon pls! This is amazing! And also are they like animals to a degree? Like one is the dominate and the other the submissive mate? Also are they like soul mates? And could you repost the original version pls?
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