gah! i hate this type of woman. not listen her father and makes her so cheap! she is so easy. i kniw love is blind but have some dignity!

the gang wasnt bad, edward? isnt they selling drugs? the rumor said. hooe this not blind love story with care in first but then i dont care about people in the end coz she love him and he love her, its enough. hope she stop him do bad things.

Wonderful story! Truly!

D! except starting after before they got married and went to school and all that, but I know it wouldn't really be important to the Aro plot...

Was there ever a sequel? And if so, where the hell can I find it? Want more of this story, for sure! Loved it to death!

Oh, no, this is just getting worse and worse! Using human guinea pigs? I'm beginning to think that his will not be a HEA for EB...is Edward blowing her off, or just trying to get out of the gang? I know she is in danger, and a huge distraction for hlm, but I thoght he loved her? I can't believe that I never read this story before. It is so good, but so angsty and terrible, too. Especially since these kids are so young!

Is Edward only 18? He seems older, and totally ruthless!

This story is amazing! Finished it in a couple of days. This story could easily be adapted to a movie. I love how the different point of views kept me guessing. One of the hottest Edwards I’ve ever read.

Dunno if that’s a good name for a clinic

So edward just got off scott free?.. that sucks

Wait im confused...edward was. Abad guy but framed james? He wont get in any trouble?

Wow I really dont know what to say, for once. There werent any grammatical errors, inconsistencies in the story, and you wrapped up every last storyline. This story was incredible, truly. It was a perfect mixture of dark, action, and romance. I didnt know what to expect. When I first started reading I thought the fact there were a million different POVs would bother me but all of the information shared was vital to the storyline, there werent any unnecessary or annoying plots. This Edward had such an intricate mind that was fascinating to be a part of. Your Bella was a little too innocent and quirky at times but by the end of the fic I had warmed up to her and came to like her. Your characters were all very well defined and interesting. The amount of details in the story, specifically with all the chemistry related things, was also really refreshing. I felt like I was actually witnessing this all happen. Overall, I'm beyond impressed. It was an incredible read and I'd recommend it. I'd love to see future epilogues and a sequel if thats still something you both want to pursue. Thank you so much for sharing this work.

I think Edward killed Bella's brother...

Absolutely loved it! Even though it's been more than a year since you posted but still I hope there will be a sequel to this awesome story;-) Thank you so much for sharing your work!

This story had action, intrigue, romance and drama. This human Edward was as dark as I've ever read. This fic definitely kept me guessing. That me for sharing.