Reviews for Hour Follows Hour |
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![]() ![]() sooo cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit that was a powerful read. So powerful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good timetravel for that mini format |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I loved everything about this story! It's a MUCH better ending than both Severus and Hermione received in canon HP! I was wondering if Minerva was in on the secret too? Thanks for this story...it really brightened my day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I'm blown away. You are a master at your craft. Being a good writer is not necessarily about using a lot of chapters to tell a story. it's also about being able to express more, with less words. You very effectively worked you story around time, saving some you give them more time. Time travel, lapse of time and the birth of their child starts a new chapter in time. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Clever story! I hope they get dinner lamb soon haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() A real tearjerker. How I love this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your stories are really sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() That made me cry, and guffaw, and rail against the fact that this couldn’t just BE canon. Honestly.. would it have been that hard?! Beautifully written from S’s perspective during H’s years at the school. Whiskey on his oldest robes.. and a supportive wall of women.. if only. He deserved so much more. Thank you for this. |