Reviews for Creating a Balance
scrappy8 chapter 22 . 11/1/2016
great chapter
LBII chapter 30 . 11/2/2016
Nice story! Thank you for sharing your time. talents and imagination with us readers.
AragornII chapter 18 . 10/11/2016
Am glad you've made this decision with the story. Anything else would seem rather wacko...
AragornII chapter 30 . 4/3/2016
Appreciate your creative gift!
AragornII chapter 22 . 4/3/2016
You're HIRED to teach DADA!
Smiling Seshat chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
I'm sorry, but you need to work on your paragraphs. They are separated really badly and often there are up to the equivalent of 5 paragraphs in one. When a person begins to talk, it's a new paragraph. When another person talks, it's also a new paragraph. You can't have a dialogue between two people in one paragraph.
scrappy8 chapter 30 . 11/18/2015
great chapter
scrappy8 chapter 29 . 11/17/2015
great chapter
scrappy8 chapter 28 . 11/16/2015
great chapter
pettybureaucrat chapter 30 . 11/18/2015
A nice story. My favorite trio and lots of yummy sex, with a lot of humor and not much angst, just what I like in my stories.

I'm a little disappointed that they didn't have girls for the second kids, but maybe you can do a sequel and fill Grimmauld Place with adorable baby girls who grow up to be beautiful and have four overbearing, overprotective big brothers.
scrappy8 chapter 27 . 11/15/2015
great chapter
scrappy8 chapter 25 . 11/12/2015
great chapter
scrappy8 chapter 24 . 11/9/2015
great chapter
scrappy8 chapter 23 . 11/7/2015
great chapter
scrappy8 chapter 22 . 11/5/2015
great chapter
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