Awesome!

good story i like how you had naruto emerge strong but not overly godly powerful and though i saw some used points in your other stories here it cannot hurt the story itself.

it's a very good story even it is one shot all things are covered and all characters are in depth with background. keep it up ¡!?

Great chapter Update soon

Fascinating. Great one shot. Keep up the good work. Loved how you made a 200,000 word story work in less than 30,000 words.

Gai? Seriously... and I thought it would be someone else, like Konohamaru!

I just can't read anymore of this. The warning should have been of nonsense, not just of Sasuke-bashing. A prine example of twisting facts to suit a poorly thought out theme, the suspension of disbelief is ruined within the first few paragraphs.

Great Story!

This was a great story!

I SHALL WRITE MY MESSAGE TO YOU FAIR SIR/LADY (am I insulting you with not knowing your gender even if it is obvious? If I am indeed doing what I hope not I am terribly sorry) IN CAPITALS TO SHOW YOU HOW GREAT THIS FAN FIC IS! YOU ARE WHAT MAKES READERS LIKE ME LIVE ON, PEOPLE ONLY READ FOR THE GREAT ENTERTAINMENT WRITERS LIKE YOURSELF GIVE US. YOU ARE A BLESSING, GIVEN TO US BY KAMI HIMSELF! THANK YOU! And that will be the end of my message to you, thank you for taking your time to read this! PEACE!

not particularly good, for a fan fiction it was average I suppose but personally...I felt it to be very much lacking. If the story was much longer and the numerous grammatical error was dealt with, and if the choice of words were more diverse, this story would have been pretty damn good.

A good story a lot of bashing though but I do admit you pulled that of surprisingly well without screwing the story up granted it was short but such a sacrifice was OK for a otherwise good one chapter story.

Great fic. Loved how Naruto destroyed Sasuke the would-be king turned Jester.

Awww...

I love that ending.

This was truly a genius idea for a fic!
XD

Another funny revenge fic.

The best part was when Naruto revealed that the Hyuuga incident was actually one of Danzo's schemes.

I think that the story would have been even better if we saw Naruto also beating the ones in charge of the orphanage, the saboteur teachers, corrupt merchants and similars. And have Konoha removing the spiral symbol.

Loved the final twist with Gai becoming the Hokage, in sure that the only reason he ended permanently crippled was to make sure that Kakashi (who no longer had the Sharingan, making him weaker than Gai) becomes Hokage in his place.