:) great

I shudder to think of any cock shriveling... That would never do

That was a hit to his ego but he is good for making up for it.

Is there a chapter missing between 22 and 23? It goes from Edward masterbating in front of her (chapter 22) to Bella being late because she had a long conversation with Elizabeth (beginning of Chapter 23). Seems like her conversation with Edward's mother would have been covered but I'm not seeing it anywhere. If there is a missing chapter, is it possible to be sent a copy of it so I'm not missing any of the story?

That was interesting... I love how he worships her.

Loved it

I have loved everything about this venture!
*huggles*

Thanks for this!

He certainly didn't do such a great job on his previous visits to her room. At least he knows much better now. Debbie

Great chapter!

I love getting Edward's POV!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

It was a very good chapter! The next outtake sounds good, too, but would you think about a final outtake after that? Perhaps an Edward POV of chapter 11 when they fully consummate the marriage? That way, we could end on an Edward & Bella highlight? It's hard to end the story. But whatever you decide, thank you!

I don't know what to say, but I enjoyed this chapter. Thank you.

What if he left behind a pregnant widow? That is the one thing I hate about Edward's affair. He claimed to love Bella and was always going to come back to her, but that didn't stop him from enjoying another woman did it? Meanwhile Bella was alone unloved and made to feel like discarded trash.

Thanks for this. It is lovely to go back and see what Edward was thinking. When we read this from Bella's POV, we did not yet know that it was Edward all along and not Anthony in her bed. I'm glad Edward learned more about pleasuring a woman while he was in France...