|Reviews for The Demonstration|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/13
Don’t end it there! Good so far! Enjoying their friendship.
| your.usual.fanfic.addict chapter 1 . 2/12
please please please update this I love it
| Very Small Prophet chapter 1 . 1/7
Non-regulation dueling: that means whatever happens, happens. Hermione has no business objecting to the fact that she ended up fighting more opponents than she expected. Severus should not have agreed to swap seats at dinner just because he surprised her in a duel that was, by definition, going to be surprising.
Of course that also means Severus can’t object to her smacking him. And, I notice, he didn’t object to it. A Slytherin knows that no rules means no rules. As usual it’s the Gryff who expects special treatment.
| Francis-rose chapter 5 . 11/14/2017
Yes yes please more
| SnapeAddict74 chapter 5 . 11/13/2017
| chinalatina28 chapter 5 . 10/22/2017
O my god! Is there no more to this story? I'm dying! She knew he would come for her! She was grinning like a shark! She knew those thugs were in for it. What was that throbbing they used to break the glass? Why did her eyes look dead when she went in the auror's office? Why has it been a whole year since the abduction and they haven't started a relationship yet?
| Ninja Goldfish chapter 5 . 10/14/2017
I've just plucked this up off someone else's favorite list and I didn't realize it wasn't complete. If there isn't an update soon, I may cry. You wouldn't want to make me cry, would you? Obviously, lovely job so far. I really like the idea of a shark's grin on Hermione's face.
| wallyflower chapter 5 . 10/10/2017
I can't wait for the next bit. I love how the story is playing out in bits and pieces over a long time. I like your Snape, and I like your self-assured but slightly damaged Granger.
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/28/2017
Really enjoying this story
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/7/2017
Just discovered this - love it. Thank you
| blushomatic chapter 5 . 7/6/2017
Yay! Can't wait for more!
| Huffleclaw8 chapter 5 . 7/4/2017
Love this Severus! More please !
| meg527 chapter 5 . 7/4/2017
Nicely done, Severus!
| Ardentlyadmired chapter 5 . 7/4/2017
Baby steps Severus! Loving the love and that he acknowledges it to himself at least. Thanks for sharing!
| SpIdErbite20 chapter 5 . 7/4/2017
Love it. Please update again soon.