This is a beautifully written chapter.

Can you please make it longer? I don't want it to finish so soon :(

That was a great update, loved all Callies inner dialogue , and them finally getting together- hot hot hot!

OMG...WOW...I'm blown away my this chapter! Definitely well worth the wait, I loved everything about it. The Grand Canyon bike tour, Arizona parents marriage, Callie sharing a lil more about her famiy and their great couple selfie pic...ALL of it was so sweet! You can just picture it all...love all da details! Even Callie dealing with inner voice with more confidence! :)

Loved the sexiness of hotel banter and Callie trying to get herself under control but not really wanting to! I thought it was wonderful that Arizona wanted to make sure Callie wanted THEM as Couple much as she does assurance that love making was not going to change that! Their sexy time was all kinds of HOT...I WAS IN ARIZONA IN ARIZONA!

PART II OF ARIZONA...PLEASE!
California is going to come to soon, I really don't want this story to end!

This chapter was amazing; that love scene: perfection. You translate the emotions of the characters so well and we all believe in & root for them. That's really what great writing is about. This was one of my favorite chapters I've ever read in all of fanfic (really anything). Thank you! And never apologize for delays. It's always worth the wait!

Amazing your so so good at writing. I absolutely love this story so much!

First, you don't ever have to apologize to us for the wait time between chapters. Try not to stress yourself out about it, we understand that you're busy, take your time.
But, I have the BIGGEST smile on my face right now after reading that chapter, loved the Arizona pun! You're such an amazing writer and reading your stories always makes me really happy! Thanks so much for the update! :)

Wow, so good! And I love that you waited until they got to Arizona, because how else could you really tell the joke? Perfect.

Please don't make me wait that long again

Beautiful, just beautiful. Just what we needed after that horrible scene between Penny and Callie.
Argh!

Love this story, lovedddd this chapter. Love, love, love!

As always so beautiful! Well written and just plain love!

So I was working throughout the day and I'm kinda glad because it helped spread out the chapter through the day because I'm pretty sure you're the queen of torture! Chapter 12 totally killed me! Loved it!

Marvelous! Marvelous...a chapter that is a masterpiece. LOVED IT LOVED IT!

OMG that was amazing. I'm so glad that Callie didn't freak out after. I just love Callie's inter voice. Wander if Aria suspects anything is going on between Callie and Arizona.