|Reviews for Kirito Takes Charge|
| Kian Xki chapter 1 . 9/9/2018
Finally! I have been searching for a story like this for while, no better way to declare yourself as king of the hill than to give the light of hope to a mob of terrified and unorganized people
Is actually weird how long it took me to find this kind of story, i would guess that Marty Stu are a lot more popular than the little king that has no idea of what he is doing
The clooser i found was a cross over with one punch and one where kirito made a guild, the 1st wans't kirito and the latter had a bad flow...
Anyways, i am trying to say that your idea was not only kind of original (fanfiction), the arguments were solid, the flow is aceptable and not too forced or irrational, and outside of your ROB influence to make Kirito step forward you didn't butcher his personality or give him godly guild master talents out of nowhere
You also made me think that if players in SAO had worked together then the game would have lasted no more than 3 months and only because of the trouble that is coordinating 10,000 players
| Golderik chapter 1 . 3/26/2017
is this story dead?
| Relyonme1984 chapter 1 . 4/22/2016
I read it, it looks like a wonderful start. I want more please.
| X59 chapter 1 . 4/5/2016
Interesting and pretty cool. To be honest it makes me wonder how SOA would have turned out if anyone had tried to immediately restore order to the players before everyone parted and created their own groups.
| femalefarrier chapter 1 . 2/26/2016
I love what you have so far I hope you continue can't wait to see how you take this story line
| nekora1799 chapter 1 . 1/10/2016
I actually kinda like the start of this story better than the start of the real SAO story, because now I'm pretty sure that everyone (mainly Kibaou), is going to really look up to Kirito for guidance.
| Zero-Sennin chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
I want to see where this goes. It has an interesting spin on Kirito's personality and I want to see how far he can get as a driving force for the clearers.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
I like this story! What happens next?! Will Kirito and Asuna get together? When do they fight Kayaba?
| Don'tPissOffTheFAIRIES chapter 1 . 10/1/2015
I liked it. It's a neat idea and I can't wait to see where you go with it.
| Black Silverclaw chapter 1 . 9/25/2015
This is a pretty good start. I'm excited to see how this goes.
| Mystborn08 chapter 1 . 9/25/2015
I like the concept, can't wait to see more. Writing was good, and I didn't notice any grammar mistakes either. An overall good first chapter, I'll eagerly await the next chapter.
| Death467d chapter 1 . 9/21/2015
| guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2015
I love it. I like stories that show a leader kirito.
| Mr Miliardo chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
Nice variation on the canon. Only problem, it's way OOC for Kirito.
Don't get me wrong, This. Is. Fanfiction. (kicks annoying naysayers into a chasm) So everything goes (inside some limits) and your fanfic is actually more canon than the various genderbenders (not that I dislike them, the good written ones, that is). The only dissonance is just that Kirito in your fanfic displays a maturity way above his 14 years, actually above even his years when playing GGO or at the start of Alicization. For the rest the changes made to canon in your fanfic ARE interesting.
So interesting that I'm going to wait for further chapters. :)
| Dark Magician Girl98 chapter 1 . 9/19/2015
I don't think it's that out of place that kirito decided to take charge if you of it as him wanting to save people,since we all know he has a hero complex the size of a house. Anyway I liked it