Jealous Dwalin is cute. I can't wait to see what happens next

liked it interesting to read

I like this. I don't come across a lot Dwalin/OC stories and this looks good. Update soon!

I was glad to find this new story about Dwalin as he is always my favorite dwarf. Thank you for getting the color of his eyes right. I have read everything from deep blue to brown and they are of course stone grey which kind of adds to his character. You portray him well with a stoic yet caring ere to his person even though he is the toughest fighter Erebor has to offer. I love his playful nature that comes across as condescending but really isn't. I look forward to the rest of your story and will follow it progress.

Just the first chapter, and I already love it