Reviews for The Chaotic Nature of Life
Keres47 chapter 5 . 5/22/2022
I think it would be better to describe what he looks like instead of forcing us to try and imagine what he’s been through. We don’t really have that much background knowledge on Harry besides his original worlds and that he’s been fighting a long time. So trying to imagine what you make him look like can be pretty difficult. Like is he just scared on his arms neck etc. or is his face deformed from getting his cheek blasted off. The details are important
MeMeMooMoo chapter 7 . 7/19/2021
Why are literally all of you the same? Always too brain dead to finish your posted stories.
HAEVs Sha chapter 7 . 6/1/2020
Good. But just another junk
Seraphy64 chapter 1 . 1/21/2020
I couldn't even get halfway through chapter one. Millenia old Harry and he's still a stuttering pussy.
Pimity chapter 3 . 12/9/2019
you're a bit of a pussy aren't you, author? this harry is unable to kill anyone, rather let hundreds die than execute a dangerous criminal and put him in jail so he can escape again? Go fuck yourself.
Mac55 chapter 3 . 8/7/2019
Why did you give a wizard guns? that is just weird in this super powered story
OmegaUltima chapter 7 . 7/30/2019
Aaaand the story dies just as it's getting really good, with so much left to address; and with you seemingly having vanished into the aether, there's no telling if this will ever continue

Well, I at least hope that you're still alive and kicking out there
Guest chapter 7 . 4/11/2019
Very interesting story look forward to you finishing sometime
Dispatchking1 chapter 7 . 1/3/2019
Please tell me this isn’t abandoned. This is fantastic!
Netchka chapter 7 . 12/20/2018
Interesting storyline so far. Looking forward to reading more when it gets posted.
Dreous44 chapter 7 . 8/31/2018
Good story.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 7 . 7/8/2018
A very interesting story here so far! Looking forward to reading more!
Spartan3909 chapter 7 . 6/18/2018
Thanks for the chapter _.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/15/2017
While a good over all story something stood out here.

(As Harry's foot clipped the edge of the roof, and he slammed face first into the concrete, he decided he needed more practise.

Harry spat out a few teeth with a glob of blood, and snapped his nose back into place )

He hurt himself here? How? He took a Thanagarian blade to the back, those weapons are better than common Earth based ones and those birds are more powerful than humans. If that didn't go through him there is simply no way a fall would have hurt him at all.

Had to point that out.
Fainfan chapter 7 . 11/5/2017
Great chapter
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