Reviews for Vengeance? No! Avenger! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe that I didn't read this at the same time that I first read Have Chrome, Will Travel. But I am truly enjoying it a great deal. It has all dots of opportunities for a fix-it. Can't wait to see where you take it! Thank you. |
![]() ![]() The story was so great then it ends with the obnoxious hero standard of the MC breaking up. Of course the forced hulk crap that made no damn sense kicked it off. Could've done without this ending. Enjoyed the story only for it to ruin it all at the end. |
![]() ![]() What about Nagini and the Cup? |
![]() ![]() Very well done. |
![]() ![]() Bloody brilliant. Yes I said it. |
![]() ![]() Okay so even more AU removing normal witches and wizards from America. Which at the very least the movies for Dumbled and Gellert showed they were all over the world. |
![]() ![]() Already fucked up Hermiones life by making hee a She Hulk. Why make her parents like this too? |
![]() ![]() Reparo should be permanent. Was even used in the movies to restore entire buildings and the like in the Grindelwald war movies. |
![]() ![]() Seriously not okay. Really fucked her over. |
![]() ![]() Magic doesn't bounce like that.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was an entertaining story |
![]() ![]() Just how many more chapters before you have them shagging like rabbits? I really wonder what their kids'd be like considering Hermione has the powers of the She-Hulk and Harry has two different types of Super Soldier Serums running through him. Hopefully, Fury, Natasha and Steve can break the moronic conditioning that Good Ole Fumblemort instilled in them against killing so they leave the Death Eaters eating death. It's not like any of them have any redeeming qualities after all. In most fan fiction to earn the Dark Mark you have to torture person before killing them to entertain Vulturewurst. Usually, the longer you make your victim last before going insane and killing them the higher your rank among the other Death Eaters. So, if the same applies here than why leave any alive to claim " I was Imperioused " after the war and be allowed to also offer a bribe to get off? No, far, far better to simply kill them all and let GOD sort it out. Or as ole Bing Crosby said it " Chestnuts roasting over an open fire ". Or as a long-ago saint is supposed to've said " Turn me over, I'm done on this side ". Either one works for me. Of course, if Fiendfire works her as it supposedly does in most other HP fan fics, use that and even their souls burn. No muss, no fuss. |
![]() ![]() Just a small FYI to consider if you do another story like this. If I'm remember correctly, at least from the comic book before they retconned it to heel and back, Steve's costume as Captain America ISN'T any type of cloth. It was once said to match his shield thus making scale mail comprised of Adamantium and Vibranium alloy. If you look at the early comics you can clearly see that it's a mail shirt he's wearing. Anyhoo, moving on. If Tony DOES make Iron Man suits for Harry and Hermione it would be a first that I know of. And the suits would have to work either with magic or by magic. I know of at least one other story where Harry has his own suits. Sirius called in a favor from Tony and got Harry to spend the summer with Tony. There was an accident and Tony and Harry got their minds merged for a short time. The end result was Harry with the Intelligence of Tony, but I don't remember what if anything Tony got out of it. Harry becomes Tony's assistant and was even working on the Iron Man suits for Tony along with building his own Jarvis system. Of course, Harry's suits used his magic to power them. Harry had TOTAL access to everything Stark. Unfortunately, it was never finished. I don't know why as the author seems to've abandoned it. |
![]() ![]() I'm not use to this type of Hermione. Usually, she has loving parents who worry about her. Yeah, I've read one where they were worse than this. In that one they beat her and even threw her down the stairs once because she didn't get the highest grade in class. She ended up adopted by McGonagall in it. Regardless of what Hermione might think Harry won't think any less of her because of how her parents treated her. Though, unfortunately because of his upbringing by the Dursleys he doesn't recognize that he loves her and that she loves him. But with a little help of Nat and Steve hopefully they will come to realize it. |
![]() ![]() Yeah, it was designed to hold the Hulk, BUT, and it's a really big BUT, it was never designed to hold a MAGICAL SHE-HULK! So, it's very possible that she'll escape using magic. Maybe not intentionally but by her desire to escape or just blow out a wall. Net and Steve made a big mistake by taking Harry away from the cabin. Harry knows Hermione better than they do and he knows she wouldn't really hurt him. |