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![]() ![]() Why does everyone keep saying this is a good story? This really isn’t. This story is just the biggest Luffy glaze session ever. The MC constantly glazes Luffy to no end, he may as well deep throat Luffy. I’m done reading. In the first four chapters alone there is just way too much Luffy glaze, I can’t stand it. What’s more is that the MC is extremely weak and instantly revealed his background to the Straw Hats, he didn’t even try to hide the fact that he’s from Florida. |
![]() ![]() ![]() After rereading this 3rd time and the relevations manga and knowing what AWAKENING really means for LUFFY makes things a lot challenging for you guys i expect. ODA sensei is cooking hard and I would really love to see whenever u come back to finish this how you would take these changes into account |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this chapter it had a perfect blend of horror and light hearted humour I especially liked how we got to see the reactions of others who were spectating during the broadcast I hope you do more movies of one piece can’t wait to see which will come up next keep up the amazing work hope you are doing well in these difficult times |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man I hope when this kicks off again that Crossco come back with fanfare. i can just see soundbite blasting 'Welcome to the jungle' as Cross, Lasoo and Funkfreed tear apart a marine battleship with his merry band of lunatics from Serpent |
![]() ![]() Here’s an idea for when you get to the end of Cross’ canonical knowledge. “Just to let you guys know, from here on out? WE FLY BY THE SEATS OF OUR PANTS! PFFHAHAHAHA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading this chapter even if it was a little sad but nonetheless still enjoyed reading it and I hope Robin realizes soon that her friends are with her to the end and hopefully cross can prove that to her |
![]() ![]() "Edward 'How the heck is he not a D.' Newgate" Maybe it's actually "E. D. Ward Newgate"? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter so much if there’s anyone I identify with emotionally Dearing this chapter it was Frankie it was him or boss Dugan because he is right the Afro is truly a man’s romance |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have no words that can describe of how much I enjoyed reading this chapter so I will say it in the most simplest way this is so comically hilarious hi had to take breaks in between this chapter because I was laughing so hard I can only imagine what other type of shenanigans they’re going to do in the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter so much I can only imagine how much Jonathan‘s going to regret taking crosses challenge may God have mercy on his soul and cry havoc and let loose the dogs of war because this is going to get good |
![]() ![]() ![]() "the blessing to ensure nothing was left unsaid." ? thats horrific. why would you write that?! i started screaming out loud in real ass life when i read that. wtf. why |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel so stupid. It took me until my fifth read through of this story to realize Cross was asking Donny and Sanji for the firefighter outfit and chocolates respectively |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am recommending anyone reading skip chapter 15 entirety. its not poorly written or anything, but its like one of those filler episodes the anime makes when waiting for the manga to updatecough* shippuden) seems to have no relevence to the story obscenely long Christmas episode for everyone i guesstho i do hope the author had fun writing it!)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unbelievable, just… wow… like, I figured there were talented people who are capable of making great stories, but in the near 1 year of me fully integrating myself into the world of fanfiction, I never thought I would find a story that would make me become so invested that I would start to look into all that there is to offer from this community. From the fact alone that this is turning 10 this year is not only mindboggling, but the fact that I read 2 million words in the span of almost a month is something that I didn’t think I would be capable of doing. But what I would say is the final nail of this whole thing is that… I’m not even remotely integrated into One Piece, this is practically my first full exposé into this world after curiousity just brought me here when I had nothing else to read, and man, I don’t regret spending my time reading over this incredible story. Matter of fact, this story alone pushed my decision to finally watch the show for the first time, like I’ve seen out of context clips, pictures, memes, etc. but never fully understood the meaning nor impact behind those moments. And so, once I get my affairs in order, I will start my own journey into this crazy, cruel, yet beautiful world, and see just what exactly there was that inspired these dudes to make this story what it was. Now, as for Jeremiah Cross himself, his character from otherworldly fan to quite literally changing the world of One Piece was something I didn’t think would hit me as hard as it did. I mean, this guy was just a nobody writing fanfics in his room until a messed up god dragged him into the world that, while being the world of his dreams, caused him numerous amounts of physical and mental trauma that most people just wouldn’t come back from. But what endeared me to his character the most, was his willingness to change things, to break the status quo, to make people see reason and understanding in a world that cruelly takes advantage of and manipulates people into accepting that in the end, they’re worth nothing. His belief that people can change, can rise up to become better, and take the handle over their own lives just really made me think about my own choices, and what I did over the course of my own life, so that’s probably why I just stuck around and loved seeing him try his damndest to make these people, his friends, happier and continue finding that sense of adventure and freedom. But if there was one thing about his character that I kind of wanted more of, was seeing more of his personal life back on earth, like who was Jeremiah Cross the normal human, rather than “Voice of Anarchy” I dunno I just want to pick apart everything about what this man so determined to sacrifice so much of his own well being for people who weren’t even technically real on Earth. Overall, there is so much that I would love to talk about over the events of this story, but I don’t want this to be about half the length of this beast of a story. So, to preface what my feelings are on this, this story is something that those who know of, or have at least heard of One Piece, should read-honestly the moments that are written here are some of the best in the medium and I wish more and more people talked about it. I am sad that there’s a hiatus, but really it just gives me an opportunity to fully explore this world and find out just what it is I’ve been missing out on for the 25 years that this property has been out. I look forward to the day when these guys finally return to finish this story they have made, and moreso for whatever diabolical cliffhangers they make becuase, hoo boy, that epilogue sure did put a pit in my stomach! Also quick sidenote, I’m writing this while ill at the moment, so if you notice any part of my review where it seems like I’m rambling or certain sentences feel disjointed, just know that Tynenol is one hell of a drug XD. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are a few spaces missing. Which is odd, I could have sworn that they were there the other times that I read this chapter. |