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Thomas Drovin chapter 1 . 11/2/2015
Hi there! Your story caught my eye and I have to say I am SO glad I found it when I did, for it's VERY rare to find a MALE OC in the world of One Piece Fan-Fic. I'll add this to my favourites list to see where this goes ok?

I think I'm going to like this story a lot, our pal Cross has been sent to One Piece and has got a 'partner' in the form of Soundbite. I like him a lot already! Most pirates have a parrot that talks but Cross here has a Wild Baby Transponder Snail that ate the Noise-Noise Fruit. I can see this creature has a strange sense of humour that's going to amuse and BUG Cross along with anyone else that comes across them.

I just wonder WHO supplied him with his I-Phone, the food with the biscuit and the toilet-paper? Will we EVER find out? I'll read on and see what I can find out! Onwards!

PS: Because of the I-Phone Soundbite swallowed does that mean he can recite movies, their noises and soundtracks? Just curious, next chapter!
The Utterly Fabulous Z chapter 5 . 10/26/2015
Why can't Cross eat biscuits?

Will there be a new chapter soon?

When's Chopper showing up?
ForeverAWSOMEAuraSpaceDragon chapter 5 . 10/26/2015
NEXT TIME! THE WHALE OF FEELS! (Ye, that what I like to call Laboon) Is it weird I'm exited for the massive whale? Is Cross going to reassure him that Brook's coming? Is Soundbite going to copy Laboon's loudas 'bwoooooh' at insane volumes? Are they going to do something so Merry dosn't get decapitated? (that scene is a pet peeve of mine. Why would someone do that to poor Merry?!) Can't wait for the next update, hopeing that it comes soon! Keep up the awsome work dude!
Turtle Kid the Woolgatherer chapter 5 . 10/25/2015
An SI fic that's already changing things!? Heck yeah, sign me up!
xxxrae97xxx chapter 5 . 10/24/2015
Man, this fic always refreshes me. Great chapter
vampireharry the 2 chapter 5 . 10/24/2015
Another awesome chapter! Keep up the amazing work!
vampireharry the 2 chapter 4 . 10/16/2015
I love this! I can't wait for more!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/14/2015
The vaporizing stone thing seems pretty cool making super load sounds in in someone's ears maybe a sonic boom or concussion grade thing and he could be pretty badass cross should practice fighting too love your story
Guest chapter 4 . 10/14/2015
I love this story nothing overpowered it flows conversations feel natural and I genuinely like the main character and his snail it was something new I haven't seen before I hope you continue to write thank you
Lindt02 chapter 4 . 10/11/2015
I like your story a lot ! the idea of the snail is awesome it's cool and original ;D
an maleOc is kind of a rarety because it's always (very often) girl who fall in love with someone (law, kidd, ace ect...) i really don't like those story they are so unroginal and cliché...
But in your story Cross is very funny with Soundbite XD ! and he manage to find a original cover story. Really i am really glad to find a good OC story really.

Good idea to introduce Barthy! it was nicely done ;) of course the meeting between Smoker and Cross was awesome in the chap 3 :D i also liked that Cross understood that he can't directly confront the ennemis he is a good distraction with Soundbite, it's more realistic with that and his stamia problem. ( thank god finally a oc who isn't a GaryStu ! )
i wonder what he will do with the staff that Smoker gave him ?
Good luck with the next and update soon !
p-s sorry for my english
nightmaster000 chapter 4 . 10/10/2015
Another awesome chapter. :)

Will we see more of a butterfly affect happen in the story as it goes on, with actions and choices Cross makes?

Good twist having Cross also talk to Bartolomeo.
xxxrae97xxx chapter 4 . 10/10/2015
I'm so glad this exists, it's pretty cool and original so far. Great chapter, can't wait for the next!
northpeach chapter 3 . 10/10/2015
Sounds awesome, I'm in.
somnolentSlumber chapter 3 . 10/9/2015
damn this is far better than the premise suggested

also i have a list of a fair number of legitimately good well written naruto SIs if you wanna shoot me a pm
LoveLifeForever chapter 3 . 10/9/2015
Is he gonna remember to buy a Log Pose before they leave?

Loving this story so far!
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