|Reviews for What Makes a Brother|
| Nutella Swirl chapter 1 . 9/1/2017
This was amazing! So sweet and descriptive. Loved it!
| FearlessLeader-Leonardo chapter 1 . 5/4/2017
Awww! The bro fluff feels are real!
| PopcornWolf10 chapter 1 . 1/20/2017
Woah... this was... something that left me lost for all words but one, amazing.
| Sesshomarusama3 chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
My heart bleeeeeds! Well done!
| Annie Park chapter 1 . 7/5/2016
Awww! Oh God! This is so, so, soooooooooo, SO cute that I think I just melt. This is... Woah! God, God, God, I have no words! It's amazing, magnificent, beautiful, tender...! And... Aw! You're SO, SOOOO talented! :D This was not horrible, it's too great! I LOVED it with all my heart. And I don't usually mourn with fanfictions, but this one get me. Really. It's just... Ywagh! I don't even know how to explain! When Raph says "I'll do anything, go through anything, to look after you, Mikey" Oh God, I just started to mourn so hard! I'm still crying, haha! It is so, so beautiful! I love good characterization here, dude! Mikey was Mikey and Raph was just so... Raph, haha, good job! Very, very, very good work! God, I really loved it! I do not know what to say that was better than all comments you have before, but I assure you have a big fan here! Keep writing, PLEASE! You're VERY FANTASTIC at this!
| Sweetheart91597 chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
So much feelings :)
Finally someone who does something with one of my favourite episodes ever :D
Great job! :D
| acty chapter 1 . 10/13/2015
this the actionfactionfictionfan but i am too lazy to log in. u know how it is...
Raph and Mikey fluff is my weakness; i had similar thoughts on this episode and i must admit that it was interesting to know that i was not the only one. well written; your grammar was neat and mostly correct (don't feel bad for mistakes; we all miss one or two) and the thing with the plot bunnies? Yeah. me. always.
as for an apocalyptic story, YYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! i love them very much, even though i could never, ever write one. So i enjoy reading them and seeing other people's talents shine where mine do not. seriously, shoot me a PM if your write one because i will read it a million times over.
anyway, this actionfactionfictionfan, over and out.
| Orange Dash chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
Awww! This was so cute! Great job!
| AwkwardDragon chapter 1 . 10/2/2015
This was good. I liked this. Nice job.
| InsaneDutchGirl chapter 1 . 9/24/2015
You're back again! I'm not going to cry, I swear (too bad my promises aren't as trustworthy as Raph's sniff). But I'm glad you're a little more active because I missed talking to you girl And the weirdest thing, I've been thinking of Eye of the Storm just a couple of days ago and reread the whole thing. So I guess we should have another update right, hehe.
But for now this quenched all my thirst for your stories and the brofluff obviously. I loved this episode, it had way more depth than most have. The bad guys are getting eviller (totally a word of course) and I think I like it. And the aftermath you described in your chapter, it fit so well. Especially Raph's characterization. There are no reasons or in his words 'psychological crap' connected to his motives. He just knows what to do. He acts on instincts and that means he'll keep Mikey, and all of his brothers really, safe even when it costs him. It's pretty sweet how Raph decided to open up and show Mikey the truth. It's probably more than enough what he just told Mikey. The little guy trusts his brothers with everything he has so when Raph tells him he matters and that he can count on him, Mikey will believe it within a heartbeat.
I also like how you explained it all. Mostly fanfiction writers are like, big brothers take care of the little brothers so because Mikey is the youngest he's protected the most. Or because he's so innocent he's protected from the dark world out there. And who knows, maybe they're right. But in the end, I think it's more logical like this. I mean, have the guys ever stood still for a moment and wondered why they are so protective of Mikey? I think they would come to the same conclusion Raph just did really. As for Mikey, he has other things to worry about. He knows his brothers and him have each other's backs and that's all he needs to know. I just like it better that way I think.
Anyways, I'm going probably overthinking this again so I'll shut up. Oh and about the AU idea you mentioned? I say do it and I'll be your ever faithful reader again hahaha. But on one condition, update Eye of the Storm for me, kay?
| anime-queen46 chapter 1 . 9/21/2015
LOVE! You should a follow up one shot based off the last episode where they kidnapped Mikey and the bros went after him. PLEASE!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
YES. THANK YOU. This has been in my mind for awhile now, and you've expressed it beautifully. Just...thank you.
| Guest-Kcr chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
U made this one the perfect day
| ducky mikey chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
| Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 9/19/2015
Awww cute and awesome, I loved it and nice job