|Reviews for At First Sight|
| SilverontheRose chapter 2 . 4/26/2017
I'll be gentle and tell you that for some reason, fanfic writers keep using the word wither during sex scenes. That would be terrible, horrific even, because wither means to shrivel up and dry out. Like a plant that you forget to water for six months, not a pretty sight. Now, the word writhe is a much better one. It means to twist and squirm, or contort. Which can be bad, yes, but can also be very good. Very good indeed!
Loving confused Jasper! Right gentlemanly of him to think of Bella first, there at the end. It made me snicker. Thanks for sharing!
| Celtic Shadow Mage chapter 2 . 2/18/2017
WOOOHOOOO! ! ! ! ! !
| traceybuie chapter 2 . 11/27/2016
I hope Jasper doesn't get all wimpy about dealing with Malice when they go back. I loved that she mated with all of his personalities. I hope she can get them to join as 1 by making him feel emotionally safe around her.
| traceybuie chapter 1 . 11/27/2016
Alice is ugh... I like how Jasper just knew and changed her. Hopefully Bella just knew as well.
| Jessica Love1 chapter 2 . 5/1/2016
You are good with the lemons.
I truly think.
So what happens next?
How is Alice going to handle this stuff?
How will Jasper act to his old friends?
Why don't Jasper use bagged blood?
I mean with colored contacts than animal blood since he doesn't like it?
Please update soon!
Thanks for listening!
| kspauldinghyatt chapter 2 . 3/28/2016
Pleaseeeeeeeee update soon
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/10/2016
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/5/2016
I want more!
| foreverythingsweet chapter 1 . 1/31/2016
I'm already completely in love with this story! Please continue and update soon!
| annie.jo.marie chapter 2 . 1/30/2016
| xxxbulletxxx chapter 2 . 1/25/2016
I love Jasper and Bella pairings! Great start! I can't wait to see how this story unfolds. Alice needs to go ahead and make peace with losing Jasper before she gets her ass handed to her by Bella or the Major.
| Chrissiel chapter 2 . 1/22/2016
Please continue this story i have enjoyed it very much
| JynxxD chapter 2 . 1/15/2016
You did a fine job! And I'm looking forward to learning about their relationship. Hopefully, Jasper will be able to handle her as she seemed pretty content to be with the Major/Ares just fine.
| AHealingRenaissance chapter 2 . 1/14/2016
Woohooo! I had to go back and read the first chapter to remember which one this is, but I LOVE IT! :D (Okay, Imma go read this chapter now... :D)
WOW! :jawfloor: I always like Jasper as Ares best, then the Major, but this chapter was just...DAAAANG! I can NOT wait for the next chapter - there's still the "dwarf" (bwahahahahaha!) to contend with, not to mention the saintly Cullens and Peter and Charlotte are going to be a hoot! :D
| Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 2 . 1/14/2016
Awesome job I love it.