Yo big dawg when u finna update this

Dude this fic is fantastic

No harem? Fucking garbage. Eat a dick.

I wanted to see what all the passive aggressiveness in the summary was about, turns out it’s just flowery descriptions. You don’t have to play with words like this if it serves no purpose lol.

Typicaally you should only add this much fancy descriptions to either bring attention to some particular detail or paint a more vivid picture of a particular view, not everything. What we have herei just feels like elaboration for elaboration’s sake, and it doesn’t really add anything other than word count.

Credit where credit’s due, individually each sentence flows smooth enough that the entire thing reads comfortably despite the excessive descriptions.

This is a very strange fanfic. The arc in Kiri is very boring. Mei is too strong. Naruto's power level is unrealistically low. I get that he doesn't have tailed and sage mode. But he's a fucking veteran of the most complicated war ever. Fucking genius fuinjutsu. He's had an assload of time to get used to his powers but the author decided that "celebrating a strong woman in a male society who isn't just eye candy" was more important than narrative logic. It's especially funny considering that this "not eye candy" is actively seducing him.

I don't understand why Naruto has so little chakra. He has more chakra than Hiruzen even without taking Kurama into account. Even Uzumaki's "standard" chakra reserves are large.

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Thanks for the read again, much enjoyed!

Sitting here listening to the story Nanashi was telling Naruto in Ichi Rakus, I couldn't help laughing from the start. Thinking even with Canon Naruto's attitude towards Ramen, his never quit demeanor, and his sometimes rather rash actions before thinking, this has the potential to go epically wrong. Having two possible outcomes basically writing themselves in my head.

1. While Nanashi is worrying about preventing Sasuke from going rogue, Naruto ends up being the one who goes rogue seeking out Orochimaru having decided he needs to get stronger in order to join the war on the side of the ramen chefs. To end up with Sasuke's cold demeanor and start demolishing restaurants and brutally killing any and all other Noodle chefs throughout the elemental nations.

or

2. Naruto having taken the thought of the other noodle cooks poisoning Ramen lovers way to close to heart, borderline obsessing over it. Deciding at some point to basically dawn an alter ego, drawing inspiration from the anonymity of some Anbu that hed come across, comes up with some full body covering outfit with a demonic resemblance of their be dawned systematically thru out his missions out side of the village as he comes across any cooks who seem to Favour serving other noodles over leaving a trail of cooks bodies in his wake traveling around the elemental nations, seemingly leaving no trail or clues as to why all these chefs are being targeted or who is targeting them.

And to top it all off, sitting here laughing about how absolutly fucked and/or hilariouse wither of these could go, i bet you could imagine the absolute bitchslap back to reality and the death of the laughter when i hear the sentance at the end start playing

"If only I had known what that prank would lead to, and how it would shape "the future to come, maybe I would not have been as amused."

Should have stuck with your first statment i suppose. "But there was no
way I could play a prank on my younger self. Right?"

Needless to say, I thoroughly cant wait to see how it comes back up later on down the road. Truly genius idea. And great writting in general.
*Blessed Be*

You mean he weakness level. There is no power there.

Always loved this story and hated seeing it end here. Hope things are good with you now, I’ve battled depression before it’s an ongoing issue but one that I continue to make strives with. Good luck in your own battles and maybe one day we’ll see you back here

Are you still alive?

If so can you please at least make another chapter please.

J'adore et naruto reprend le chakra .

J'adore qu'elle est le niveau de naruto ?

J'adore l3 voyage dans le temps.