God damn that was some good Emma characterization. Usually in fanfics they have her fold or do something obviously stupid when she finds out Taylor has powers. But this Emma is manipulating everyone and everything around her to her benefit, and being pretty subtle about it too. Good job.

I’m pretty sure in those loops they can’t change their actions. So Emma can’t have those convos.

Interesting story. Emma still comes off as bitchy, but it’s a very understandable thing.

Welp, this was depressing.

Wow that was well done. A little ambiguous if anyone actually feels guilt or remorse but thats probably intensional. Wouldn't mind a folow up one day when Taylor fixes things or if Zion or Edelion actually gets of their buts though.

Gives me similar vibes to an old goosebumps book.

I've really enjoyed reading your works. Thankypu for writing them!

Beautifully written, thought I don't know how to feel about Emma's comment about her situation in the alley being the same as taylor's now, It's clearly different.

wow that was depressing
was kinda expecting sexy times

This is really good.

What a heartbreaking story.

Damn, this is a horrifically depressing and fantastically interesting concept for a fic.

hope she never loops another person

o i wonder if grey boy was like tat once

Favorited. Now THAT is what I call a one-shot.

Very good story