Reviews for Twenty Three Shades of Gray
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 2 . 1/15/2022
I’m pretty sure in those loops they can’t change their actions. So Emma can’t have those convos.
Caver Floyd chapter 2 . 6/27/2021
Interesting story. Emma still comes off as bitchy, but it’s a very understandable thing.
BlackStarMage chapter 2 . 1/9/2021
Welp, this was depressing.
Diggin chapter 1 . 12/28/2018
Wow that was well done. A little ambiguous if anyone actually feels guilt or remorse but thats probably intensional. Wouldn't mind a folow up one day when Taylor fixes things or if Zion or Edelion actually gets of their buts though.

Gives me similar vibes to an old goosebumps book.
mollachd chapter 2 . 10/25/2018
I've really enjoyed reading your works. Thankypu for writing them!
ReadR13 chapter 2 . 10/2/2018
Beautifully written, thought I don't know how to feel about Emma's comment about her situation in the alley being the same as taylor's now, It's clearly different.
Sebine chapter 2 . 8/1/2018
wow that was depressing
was kinda expecting sexy times
Guest chapter 2 . 5/8/2018
This is really good.
FreelanceBum chapter 2 . 8/20/2017
What a heartbreaking story.
FreelanceBum chapter 1 . 8/20/2017
Damn, this is a horrifically depressing and fantastically interesting concept for a fic.
Tobi14 chapter 2 . 5/27/2017
hope she never loops another person
Tobi14 chapter 1 . 5/27/2017
o i wonder if grey boy was like tat once
TheChairIsAgainstTheWall chapter 1 . 5/24/2017
Favorited. Now THAT is what I call a one-shot.
marsolino chapter 2 . 8/30/2016
Very good story
Draco Oblivion chapter 2 . 8/28/2016
Hmmm, I was expecting a cathartic revenge fic but I don't actually know how I feel about this. It's interesting I'll give you that, also have to appreciate that you didn't try to overdo it with making Emma seem like either the devil incarnate or just some misunderstood teen who made a mistake, it was very honest. Left me feeling neither particularly happy or sad (more puzzled than anything) but I liked it all the same.
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