I’m pretty sure in those loops they can’t change their actions. So Emma can’t have those convos.

Interesting story. Emma still comes off as bitchy, but it’s a very understandable thing.

Welp, this was depressing.

Wow that was well done. A little ambiguous if anyone actually feels guilt or remorse but thats probably intensional. Wouldn't mind a folow up one day when Taylor fixes things or if Zion or Edelion actually gets of their buts though.

Gives me similar vibes to an old goosebumps book.

I've really enjoyed reading your works. Thankypu for writing them!

Beautifully written, thought I don't know how to feel about Emma's comment about her situation in the alley being the same as taylor's now, It's clearly different.

wow that was depressing
was kinda expecting sexy times

This is really good.

What a heartbreaking story.

Damn, this is a horrifically depressing and fantastically interesting concept for a fic.

hope she never loops another person

o i wonder if grey boy was like tat once

Favorited. Now THAT is what I call a one-shot.

Very good story

Hmmm, I was expecting a cathartic revenge fic but I don't actually know how I feel about this. It's interesting I'll give you that, also have to appreciate that you didn't try to overdo it with making Emma seem like either the devil incarnate or just some misunderstood teen who made a mistake, it was very honest. Left me feeling neither particularly happy or sad (more puzzled than anything) but I liked it all the same.