Pretty late to get a reply to this but damn they just left his body there to rot? No burial no nothing no report to the family? How did they confirm death did they just assume he died when he didn’t show up or did they see the body and just not take it back?

This might be the 3rd time I've reread this, but certainly the first in a long while. It was neat to see that Adam basically got branded in your story before canon caught up. It's also been great to read the reviews where people are confused about events as if Salem, the God's, and everything else had already happened when this was in progress.

"Why didn't Daddy Coeur make his story completed 7 years ago compliant to events it existed prior to!?"

Loved it as much if not more than the first time. I hope your Mom is still well and that the week of meetings you have planned doesn't drag you down as hard as it sounds like it will. Take it easy.

I remember reading this years go and it stopped on chapter 65 at the time now I reread this entire fic after I was done with service with a smile I absolutely love the dynamic of jaune and Blake and how they get close after hardship.

it reflects very close to whats happened between myself and the love of my life! the feelings, the things unspoken but implied. Pushing away the one we love out of percieved sense of "its the right thing to do" and learning to actually be open and selfish with the love we hold.

learning, growing.

I adore this story the emotional beats make it all to real for me and I love that. Thank you for another amazing story!

Binged this as well, not bad solid 7/10

Me preguntó, ¿juane tendra poderes tipo beyond two souls, o solo será un fantasma miron?

I’m sick of this lesbian bullshit.

NOOOO NOT THE JAR CARDIN NOOOOOOO

I like the teddy bear jaune more ;-;

Another enjoyable story. Now for ‘White Sheep!’

I haven’t laughed like that in a while

I’ve never been a fan of that whole threatening a guy by grabbing his genitalia stuff. I feel like you can’t really do the reverse.

If it stays like this then the story is completely ruined and I’ve wasted my time

Yang’s just getting increasingly more annoying as if she has zero social skills which we all know she has a ton

God why is there so much Cardin?

Feels like you conveniently overlooked the fact that the Schnee literally brand their Faunus miners as if they were slaves or property. Yeah, sure the Schnees aren’t the bad guys they literally started everything by attacking the then peaceful WF and completely overlooking their wishes for equality and peace between races. This was completely one sided to make Faunus look bad instead of looking at things between what led up to the WF becoming aggressive over peaceful; main reason being the Schnee aka Jacques.