So jaune is Kon from bleach? XD LMAO

This has to be the third or fourth time I've read this story, but I am confident in saying that I would not mind a sequel to come of this. Just thinking about all the comedy that could come from Blake having yo explain her new 'girlfriend' as well as Jaune having to come to grips with the Joy's of womanhood-not to mention all the struggles of finally being able to be in a relationship and trying g how to actually do the stuff that comes with that...

I'm smelling a pretty good medium to long story here...

This has to be the third or fourth time I've read this story, but I am confident in saying that I would not mind a sequel to come of this. Just thinking about all the comedy that could come from Blake having yo explain her new 'girlfriend' as well as Jaune having to come to grips with the Joy's of womanhood-not to mention all the struggles of finally being able to be in a relationship and trying g how to actually do the stuff that comes with that...

I'm smelling a pretty good medium to long story here...

I know that this story is over and you probably ain't reading the reviews anymore but you left a plothole left in the story.
Plothole: Jaune agreeing to Neo agreement so that she could bring him back to Blake.
What did the heck happen? Are we just going to pretend that this wasn't going to happen? I noticed that tends to become a trend for stories with numerous side-stories. You become so wrap and writing the story that you tend to struggle with keeping up with all of the plots you created.
So, in short, a really bad ending for an otherwise funny story with plots so many you wouldn't be able to finish unless you focus on writing one story at a time instead of writing multiple.

awsome and now i really want more! i swear you have written most of the good rwby stories by yourself and ive been binge reading them for the last few days. thanks again

it could be psychosomatic, i guess.

I'm not sure if you've ever read the Dresden Files, but Jaune is starting to remind me of Bob the Skull. A lot.

While I'm all for a Yuri Ever After ending, I can't help but think that this entire situation could be resolved by using the Aura Transfer Machine to switch Jaune and Penny around. Either way, loved the story. Great work.

Man great story, I was even surprised when Jaune was locked in Amber's body

I have a feeling this author really loves and hates Jaune simultaneously

Dang it. I really wanted to see the rest of Team RWBY's reactions here. Wonderful story though, loved it. Love all your stories actually. Great work.

You clever shit...

Kind of sad he didn’t bluff his way out like saying he is a artifact acting as a prison for a demon, if he doesn’t get back to beacon then the demon is let loose. That would have been enough for neo to try her best to bring him back.

... Every single chapter name is a fucking pun on a paranormal work, you fiend.
... Except 57, for some damn reason.
What the hell?

Is it bad that I could imagine Qrow doing that?