Reviews for Blonding
Goody2shoos39 chapter 22 . 12/4/2018
I really, really enjoyed reading this. Very well done. Awesome job.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2018
Great read, thats all their is to it ;)
kolroling chapter 22 . 11/19/2018
this was a awesome read! I just wonder how and where zetsu got the seed "umigakure" tree from? *spoiler alert* because shinju can't produce anymore sense kaguya ate the fruit.
Iamnothere12 chapter 6 . 10/17/2018
Goddamn this naruto is nerfed to hell even with his chakra is overloaded he still has massive physical and fast speed
StormEyeDragon chapter 22 . 10/4/2018
Great Story.
Thank you.
Lucifer chapter 22 . 9/27/2018
This is no doubt one of the best fictions i have ever read...
I finished reading it in just 2 days...
I was so much enjoying myself while reading it...
I really was drawn inside the story completely...
Amazing writing...
Please keep it up...
Arsenal chapter 5 . 8/18/2018
When fanfic writers write dumb Naruto, I get really mad because I think it's a waste of writing fanfic. Fanfic is to improve upon canon, not rehash canon. Please try and make a smarter Naruto.
Train Heartnett chapter 22 . 8/8/2018
Awesome !
pinnicus chapter 22 . 7/29/2018

The grammar/spelling was spot-on (I only counted like 2-3 typos), the plot was amazing and unique and something I could’ve never thought of, and the whole Hidden Sea thing? 10/10. The idea of it was awe-inspiring, and I totally want to make a fanfic of it because that could totally have been canon and I never would’ve noticed had I not watched Boruto. The whole thing with Three and One was truly creative and unique and I truly want to know just how you came up with that. And the way you wrote about Three’s emotions (and really everyone) when she had to become One made her seem so /real/. And Boruto consoling her was totally something he’d do. And again, I totally want to write a fanfic and draw /so much fanart/ of this, it’s not even funny.

And I usually don’t get this inspired about stuff, just to show how good this was.

You made everyone and everything seem so real and detailed, and this could totally be a real, paperback novel, it’s that good. The title is also funny, I appreciate the pun. And Naruto’s talk-no-jutsu is a fearsome ability. Poor Obito, haha. But, back on track, the plot-line and Hidden Sea Village arc was so creative and so unique, it’s awe-inspiring. I’ll truly remember this, as it’s so good I actually /can’t/ forget it. 17/10, 16 stars, it truly breaks the record for “best fic ever”. And, again, not an over exaggeration. Usually, I don’t like OCs or something as major as a new Hidden Village, but you truly wove it in so neatly even I don’t mind. You made it seem like that whole thing was entirely canon. I truly can’t show my love for this enough, and I’ll be sure to read it over and over again, and I’ll be keeping and eye out for that epilogue! And thanks to the betas, too- you just made this all the better.

Again, can’t express my love for this enough. Good job! I’ll be sure to check out your other stories!
Xeranes chapter 1 . 7/24/2018
Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2018
I don't think "beautiful" was the right adjective to use for naruto's eyes. The perspective was Minato's and he didn't know that Naruto was his son so he shouldn't have any emotional fatherly affection yet. If Naruto has similar eyes to Minato, it wouldn't make sense for Minato to think his own eyes were beautiful unless they were seen on his son.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/10/2018
Fucking suberb I read this istead of sleepin
Will-of-the-Night chapter 2 . 7/9/2018
Beginning is too long-winded in my eyes. The back story is in too much detail and it just dampens it a bit. With this sort of story you can usually get away with using flashbacks to help the story along and only have long explainations if it has something really esoteric or non-canon like bloodlines or techniques. Sorry if I sound like I'm ranting or dissing your story. Just giving you my view.
NothereNorthere chapter 22 . 7/2/2018
This was alright, but characterizations dampened the enjoyment some.
Flaming Beauty chapter 22 . 6/27/2018
It’s finished! Congratulations and thanks for continuing it was nice to watch U grow as a writer
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