Super Predictable OC and then letting Cardin beat on him? Boring and retarded.

Hmm... the premise and OC is not bad, but... compared with your Silent Ash, this story feels... underwhelming.

That was pretty sappy and brief, but nice I guess

You do realize that Monty had little to no input during season 3, right? You can't stomp on an image that was already stomped beyond recognition.

Please for the love of god change season 3 change it for the better.

That moment when Davian went "RELEASE THE KRAKEN" mode was amazing

Great story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter (but please, don't feel rushed about it and take your time with studying) and I liked how you fleshed out Davian's character/personality. Good luck on your upcoming exams and the such.

Great chapter as always. But with what happened in volume 3...are planning on changing anything? I'm not saying you should or shouldn't it's your story. Just wanted to know what I should expect.

Well...some sh!t is probably going down

Good job as always! Can't wait for you to catch up to the current story.

Is there explosions going to happen next chapter?

Just started reading...and man is this good. Character development wise is great. Grammar could be more worked on, but doesn't make the story unbearable/unreadable. Chapter 11 had quite the POV switches. You should state the character's POV, almost got confused a couple times.

romance is probaly better than what i could write.

This was nice to read after seeing the garbage that was the episode 6 ending so thanks for calming my rage down:)

Davian x yang? I approve of this pairing:) Also nice job with the romance fluff.